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I Wish they would just Go

Poem By: scaza
Poetry


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Submitted: Aug 6, 2008    Reads: 59    Comments: 5    Likes: 3   


I sit alone on my only chair.

Right next to the shadow, I'll always be.

I kept my mouth shut as I listen,

To the stories and laughters of their distance.

I alone was not perfect.

To them they are great.

To them I was nothing,

While they see the future.

I failed numerous times,

Althought untalented like them.

My mind is always blank,

That I don't know what to do.

I alone rund cold,

And wait to fail another,

To get laugh at, to get tease at,

For they don't want the weak.

The more they geer, the more I fail,

Even if i succeed that's not good enough for them,

I tried my best but all went wrong,

They didn't seem to care.

They always embarassed me,

But they didn't know,

I wasn't perfect.

I wish they would just go.


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Comments:

wow, this poem was beautiful!

there was a spelling error: geer is spelt jeer.

anywyas, this was amazing! You have true talent

keep writing (so I can keep reading, muha)

lol
from Larnie

Posted: Aug 9, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks. Yeah, i did notice the wrong spelling on jeer, i guess i forgot to change it back. :-)

Wonderful! This is very well written. Hits hard and stays with you long after you have read it.

I've posted part 6 and 7 of the "Death Catalyst Series". Would await your feedback

Peace

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks.

I like it alot. I like the statement - They embarrass me.
People like the ones you are referring to are an embarrassment to others because they just don't get it, they don't have a clue.Obviously you do. Thanks for sharing

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

gee, thanks too. i guess they never feel through what others feel of what they do to them. thanks again.

You know, that reminds me alot of myself when I was younger. I was going through depression, was suicidal, and had serious issues. Everything added together made the cruel laughter of others hurt alot. All I can tell you, is that it fades over time. When their needles prick and prick, your skin toughens to the pain, and they eventually fade to the shadows. Well written, it has an honest feel. Thanks for this Scaza.

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. I guess we were alike since I wrote this years ago. I was like you too. suicidal and depressed.

It is a good work of expression. I can appreciate the emotion behind it and the amalgamation that it become through the written word.

Posted: Oct 22, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks.



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