A Mother mourns her recently departed daughter, if only she could hear her youngsters calling above the rain. As her journey ends, an image offers eternal hope.
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Submitted: Jun 9, 2008
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Subtle is the falling rain
that taps the tin roof
Within the moist pulse
a whisper yearns to be heard
r
She is the ghost
a lost echo
Her quiet words
long to be heard
r
Heavy splashes now strike
the wet and weary glass
Dark distant skies
reflect a mothers woe
r
With hand brake applied
and loose make up on cheek
Damp eyes refocus
Behind her
in pretty dress and tight curls
Her daughters smile
confuses her gaze
r
She dare not turn
just breathes the scent of relief
Her glee and silence
exchanged and understood
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Comments:
Irwin
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Sensitively carried out and well structured poem. I like it.
Posted: Jun 9, 2008
Speachless.......Me XXX
Posted: Nov 30, 2008
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