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A Mother mourns her recently departed daughter, if only she could hear her youngsters calling above the rain. As her journey ends, an image offers eternal hope. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 9, 2008    Reads: 36    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


Subtle is the falling rain

that taps the tin roof

Within the moist pulse

a whisper yearns to be heard

r

She is the ghost

a lost echo

Her quiet words

long to be heard

r

Heavy splashes now strike

the wet and weary glass

Dark distant skies

reflect a mothers woe

r

With hand brake applied

and loose make up on cheek

Damp eyes refocus

as she finds the mirror

r

Behind her

in pretty dress and tight curls

Her daughters smile

confuses her gaze

r

She dare not turn

just breathes the scent of relief

Her glee and silence

exchanged and understood


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Comments:

Irwin
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Sensitively carried out and well structured poem. I like it.

Posted: Jun 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Many thanks as always.

Speachless.......Me XXX

Posted: Nov 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, I think this one benefits from a few reads.



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