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1. Horror 2. Pierce 3. palace 4. Nocturnal and finally: 5. Thunder
Here is my response to Lionheart's challenge. Was tough...
Finally we find the thing that scares us. Are we afforded time to explore what and why it is. No, we are snapped out of the dream...
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Submitted: May 31, 2008 Reads: 28 Comments: 5 Likes: 3
Post traumatic pins of horror
stab at retreating white skin
Each designed to pierce
then burrow deep within
Only an ill lit candle
travels the dark of this palace
Last shudder departs,
wax tastes the contract of malice
Beyond the pane
nocturnal eyes glare wonder
Snap of light
...........awoken by delayed thunder
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Very atmospheric - whatever the reason for writing it! I like it.
Posted: May 31, 2008
Ah, another one beats the Lionheart challenge!
Who is the mighty now? LOL!!!!
Hey pretty good poem Phillip. was fun huh?
Posted: May 31, 2008
Great work! Very well written and wonderful imagery. I wish you well and God Bless. Lisa
Posted: Jun 4, 2008
Oh my god.
Brutally descriptive and morose! I felt every word!
Intense poem with no happy faces in the blood lines.
Posted: Jun 6, 2008
ps - cool picture.
Posted: Jun 6, 2008
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