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Submitted: Apr 24, 2008    Reads: 43    Comments: 4    Likes: 6   


As their minds absorbed the guilt

a collision was inevitable

She rear ended his attitude

he forced her through the wind shield of sensibility

With damage surveyed

and a spillage limitation program initiated

New love, in the guise of a sharp object

awaits the inner tube of security

Skid marks the length of childhood

scar the cereal face of the road

The remains of a broken amber lamp

indicates emotions have long since departed

Florescent vests and electric blue lights

fuel every optical sense

Misplaced are the shards of promise

swelled are the veins which tangle the kiss


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Irwin
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Unusual poem, very evocative.

Posted: Apr 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks.

WoW Phillip sure is a different kinda Idea.
Real Good! I like it! katie :-)

Posted: Apr 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks.

OOOH! Great! How many "accidents" arise (dreadful ones! Broken marriages, hearts, children tugged between bitter parents etc. etc.)because of accidental meetings with someone who just blocks your vision of good sense. I really enjoyed this poem.

Posted: Apr 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks.

Oh very good.
Florescent vests and electric blue lights
They dance with joy at the meeting.

Very well done!!

Posted: Apr 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks.



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