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No Sparks No Fallen Flame

Poem By: Scribblings of a middle aged mad man
Poetry


Man's interference leaves us fearing nature. Everyday new threats materialize. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 8, 2008    Reads: 35    Comments: 2    Likes: 4   


Behind each eye

and beyond the far horizon

This deep lake of oil

fears the bright candle

 

A tide of carbon deposits

rolls to a pause

Deceptive depth

rattles with apprehension

 

From the East

the candle maker presents his wares

Nervous polluted waters

recoil to the heat

 

Rising like a phoenix

from the ashes of yesterday

Depositing strings of wax

into the sea of industry below

 

No sparks, no fallen flame

just the fear of

The chance, the danger

real and considered


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Comments:

Irwin
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Cleverly constructed, one of those poems you have to read several times to appreciate the complexities. Well done.

Posted: Feb 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. I like the idea of the sun being a door to door candles salesman.

To be a lake of oil is to always fear the fuse. The kiss of light. Very nice.

Posted: Feb 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Many thanks.



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