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The Poetry Factor Competition 2
The consumption of forbiden fruit leads to Adam and Eve being removed from the garden of Eden and forced to dream and fend for themselves....


Submitted:Nov 8, 2011    Reads: 40    Comments: 5    Likes: 7   


Gathered in verse as poetry

are the melic fruits that now fall free

Stacked words on Adam's chin

creates a title 'The Original Sin

Somber vegetation shrieks dismay

colouring the garden shades of grey

Eventide weeps trails of musk ~ scented layers of covert dusk

Lust spilled into absorbent earth

quickening mankind's heralded birth

Eve demanded they both stay

words ignored they were led away

Pollinated dream exits and burns

peace within Eden soon returns





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