Modern day crusade
a huge greed for oil displayed
Who next to invade?

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Submitted: Dec 28, 2007 Reads: 50 Comments: 4 Likes: 5
Modern day crusade
a huge greed for oil displayed
Who next to invade?
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Not only the original 5-7-5 syllable format but with a triple rhyme as well!!! Very impressive!!!
Posted: Dec 28, 2007
Well done.
Posted: Dec 28, 2007
The pithiest commenst are always the hardest to construct. Well done, and to the point.
Posted: Dec 29, 2007
well constructed words
fall like snow on the white house
they pray for silence
Posted: Jan 1, 2008
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