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Following the strict code of 5-7-5 View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Dec 28, 2007    Reads: 50    Comments: 4    Likes: 5   


 

Modern day crusade

a huge greed for oil displayed

Who next to invade?


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Not only the original 5-7-5 syllable format but with a triple rhyme as well!!! Very impressive!!!

Posted: Dec 28, 2007

Author Comment:

Yeh wasn't easy but I guess that's the point.

Irwin
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Well done.

Posted: Dec 28, 2007

Author Comment:

Cheers.

The pithiest commenst are always the hardest to construct. Well done, and to the point.

Posted: Dec 29, 2007

Author Comment:

Took a few practices, and the demolishion of a a few unrequired brain cells. Thanks.

well constructed words
fall like snow on the white house
they pray for silence

Posted: Jan 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Very good, like it.



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