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Submitted: Mar 22, 2008    Reads: 36    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


Behind the owls over sized eye,

muffled amongst the hungry babies cry

Squeezed atoms conform

Realities next waking moment is born


Wet on the fins of a tidal fish,

wrapped in the longing of an expired wish

Squeezed atoms conform

Realities next waking moment is born

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The unpronounced and paragraph

Linger beyond the nightmares laugh

Lost in Daliscape, shadowed by rows

Balanced on the petite ballerinas toes

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Frightened the voice

and selective in choice

Squeezed atoms conform

Realities next waking moment is born


Numb and asleep

stacking counted sheep

Squeezed atoms conform

Realities next waking moment is born


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Comments:

Irwin
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Ha! Yes! I love it. Some great lines.

Posted: Mar 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks as always.

Ya! I like it too :) great writing Phillip!!!!!

Posted: Mar 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks.

One to get our brain cells working - I love the middle inclusion that makes the poem for me.

Posted: Mar 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you, hope the brain cells enjoyed the work out.

Oooooh a thought! What about Select Atoms Conform! What if you could unconciously select which atoms conform to place the next moment's birth. This is deep and thanks for sharing/showing a path of the universe.

Per usual, your poetry is great.

Posted: Mar 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Many thanks, one to get your brain cells all fuzzy over.



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