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Submitted: Apr 6, 2008 Reads: 67 Comments: 5 Likes: 7
As the sirens and pulsing blue lights of consequence
chase the tail lights of action
I adopt a position of balance
on the unsteady beams of decision
Knowing each step leaves a heavy print
in the goo of time and my existence
Behind me, an unhealthy stack of memories
sways to the winds of conclusion
The breath of termination
always present and threatening the itchy air
Promised visions, dealt as dreams
replay within a timber frame
Again, and again and again
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Great choice of words and subject Phillip :)
have a nice day, katie
Posted: Apr 6, 2008
Superb juggling with words, well chosen and we are rewarded with a good, satisfying read.
Posted: Apr 6, 2008
one of the best poems i've read on this site. awsome. That is a really intelligent piece of writing you've got there. *bows*
Posted: Apr 6, 2008
Wonderfully written! The words are greatly chosen and their arrangement creates a harmonious finish. Wonderful! =)
Posted: Apr 7, 2008
Poems like this sweep me away visually and the layers of meanings are incredibly intense.
You have wonderful thoughts...
Posted: Apr 8, 2008
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