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Submitted: Mar 12, 2008 Reads: 109 Comments: 10 Likes: 6
The heart bleeds
narrow streams of aching red
stalling as they negotiate time
The heart bleeds
songs of a smile infected past
turn the handle of memory
The heart bleeds
histories page left ajar
as the photo invites tears
The heart bleeds
her beauty departs
upon the unsteady wings of change
The heart bleeds
the giddy stage of life
throws another actor into the crowd of death
My bleeding heart
a pulse that shows I care
a pump, a beat
a rhythm from here back to there
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Love this one. Very true. Well written and presented.
Posted: Mar 12, 2008
One heart beat away
Posted: Mar 12, 2008
I really like this. Simple and true.
craaig
Posted: Mar 13, 2008
It's an interesting read. I like it. Nice work.
Posted: Mar 13, 2008
The FirsT poeM i READ(urs)..is the One motivation beginners like me need !!..YOu Are a TRUe Writer and presenter..i'll browse all ur poems!!
Posted: Mar 13, 2008
wow!
Posted: Mar 13, 2008
Hi Phillip :) This poem says alot through feeling identifications and the currents of recognized time, it has much feeling in it...very, very nice*****katie!
Posted: Mar 14, 2008
wow, this is a wonderful poem! so nice and very true!!
Posted: Mar 16, 2008
i like this alot (and i loove the picture)
ur repetition was really good... i like 2 repeat lines of my poems alot and sometimes i feel like it doesnt really work 4 me but it definitely worked 4 u
Posted: Apr 2, 2008
wow...this is insanely amazing. I think this is the third time i've come back to your page to read it-- for some reason i really touches me.
"her beauty departs
upon the unsteady wings of change"
That is such beautifully written line.
It has such an incredible impact, thanks to the repeated line... a line, most certainly, filled with powerful emotion. I am so impressed; this is just...wow.
Much love
Ash
Posted: Jun 14, 2008
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