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Moody heavens reveal a mans sadness, a cure is offered and digested. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 1, 2007    Reads: 95    Comments: 4    Likes: 6   


Grey damp clouds form the stare of an ageing clown
Disguised by rain, his eyes slowly bleed tears
Below his bulk, salty pools now gather, reflecting his broken past
Brushed white smears of ill applied make up, violently deface the sky


The mirrored floor a silent witness as he slides across the heavens
His painted red grin, heavy with history and the weight of time
Serves as a hinged mask which slams shut every offer of help
Every page of neatly folded tricks he once stored in his cotton sleeves


Have now retreated to dust, escaping on the circling winds
Big coloured buttons stitched with a narrow thread of hope
Glossy discs that pulse amongst the rips of dirty silk
A distant voice produces the curve of a lucid rainbow


Interwoven in its smooth veneer comes the promise of love
A once thick oily sea now dances wild with animation
Offering a slippery hand, a giddy path back to happiness
Puffed White gloves stoop to accept an uncertain journey of hope


In full glare of an industrial sun, heard to pump out volumes of warmth
The over sized shoes of a happy clown, skilfully balances on an inflated planet we call earth
Every star links to create an illuminated big top
Shining brighter than ever, they start a standing ovation that will never stop..


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Comments:

Nice one Phil ..I recognised your work straight off..
You should get the others and the last but one up too.

Posted: Aug 1, 2007

Author Comment:

Hi Bro, will try and get up as time allows.. Am going through yours and the more I read the more I like.

Fascinating! Very creative.

Posted: Aug 1, 2007

Author Comment:

Many thanks, I hope it gives some imagery to help the theme.

Very imaged poem, I could imagine nearly everything except for what my mind was too primitive to picutre. Like I`ve said before your work is phenomenal, I plan on reading all your poems. I am uncertain wether you like sci-fi or not but if you would not mind can you please review my novel entitled "the peddler", wether you've acccepted me as fan or not I am uncertain, but I am your fan nonetheless.

Posted: Sep 19, 2007

Author Comment:

I love sci fi, I have a story I plan to write one day, just takes much more discipline to write a book. I will certainly read your suggested title and thanks again for taking time to read the poems..

Your style is very descriptive, I liked this one also

Posted: Oct 29, 2007

Author Comment:

thx for comment



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