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A walk amongst the flowers, has a sinister side. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 16, 2008    Reads: 44    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


 She was my mistress,

flowing dress and pretty curls

Eye contact remained

as we negotiated the garden path

Her cheeks were blushed

her lips full and inviting

Her smile was purpose

her squeeze strong

As we reached the path's edge

she threw me one last glance

Watching as I fell

into an abyss of deceit

As the curtains of this tale

unashamedly collide

Avoid the poisoned invitation

to view the flowers of cuckoldry


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Irwin
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Interesting the sudden change of tone - which those involved in such a thing would not see or ignore.

Posted: Mar 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you, appreciate your wisdom.

Such pretty things can cause such disaster. I really like this poem and enjoy your metaphor mind.

Posted: Mar 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Many thanks.

Nicely done, this flowed well.

Posted: Apr 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Cheers.



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