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Submitted: Jan 7, 2008 Reads: 69 Comments: 6 Likes: 5
The curtain of night, although pulled tight
Over a million random piercings let in light
A large white button longs to escape
Freedom to roam the heavy drape
Soon to be eclipsed by mornings cloud
I chalk my thoughts on the blackened shroud
The words I write upon the scrim
Simply ask....”Where did it all begin”
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According to Ben Elton we are all being blown out the butt of Gigantic space Elephant: one of the many theories I tend to sway towards.lol
I like the use of chalk ..its temporalness in harmony with the universe. Like scrawling worries in the sands and watching them fade .
Posted: Jan 7, 2008
This is magic ^-^
Posted: Jan 7, 2008
Good question. Good poem well written.
Posted: Jan 7, 2008
HEY PHILLIP!!! LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT!!!!
I love the words you use! fantabulous!!! :)
that is my own mde up word you know? LOl.
Posted: Jan 7, 2008
if we knew every beginning of every great creation... would we still admire it so much??
great poem
Posted: Jan 8, 2008
Wonderful metaphors. Or Wander-full metaphors.
Posted: Feb 2, 2008
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