Some times your so sure of what your doing or the risk it´s going to take for it. You trusted in something that now seems to be the end with no result.
This could be the reason why we try what we were told to never do. But still we stand in the same place. View table of contents...

Submitted: Apr 30, 2008    Reads: 43    Comments: 1    Likes: 2   

Door down to hell

Come to me and squael.

So much pain in it´s stain

Can´t refrain this locked chain.

Your face crashed in dismay

From hates fever that I can´t say.

My abandoned spirit was melted and forgotten.

Eyes believe this once trusted soul has gone rotten.

Trapped with this monster I created

Where all light and life faded.

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nuttyz

hei..i loved this one :)

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

ohhh wow, thanks, this one actually made me think if i really wanted to post this one up, cuz its something i feel and live so much. Nice to know u liked it nuttzy...

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