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Poem By: Sewage
Poetry

Tags: carry on, continue, move forward, pain

I was walking back from class, and it came out... View table of contents...

Submitted: Nov 6, 2007 Reads: 37 Comments: 2 Likes: 2

Living everyday

Waiting for tomorrow

To come take you away

The fire in your eyes

Drowning in all the tears you cry

Still burns through the night

I feel the heat, as we stare into the sky

Alone in your room

With nowhere to go

Dying to the sounds of

Your silent screams

Mourning the death,

Of your tortured dreams

Souls stripped and spirits broken

We walk on till we fall

Battered bodies with hearts still open

I’m here to help you carry on

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Comments:

hort363

This is a great poem, I just really like the sound of it

Posted: Nov 6, 2007

Author Comment:

It came out of nowhere, and i dunno if it formated right. But thank you nonetheless, i appreciate it...

Realy swell work. DATS RIGHT ITS ME! I got hold of the net for a min and i am glad cause this is new of you. It seems to stand out in the way it portrays itself as simple confusion although its such a hectic topic. I can emagine this in a tired and aged voice which gives it really nice effect. I dont know if u ment to do dat but u did it well. Cya soon bro we all miss ya.

Posted: Nov 13, 2007

Author Comment:

AMEER!!!! ARGH!!! I got so pissed when mom told me that dad took the internet out of the house, then he gives me shit when he calls that i dont email you guys. it pisses the living shit out of me, the way he can be so stupid sometimes. Email me from school or something...

Thank you for the poem info, you pretty much got it spot on with the simple confusion. havent tried the tired aged voice, was looking more, punky-raspy etc, but i like your idea too.

I'll see you soon bro, only a few weeks left.
Miss you.