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I wrote this a while ago and just now posting this. I incorporated the 5 sense in order to create the image of a break up
Submitted:Feb 27, 2013 Reads: 44 Comments: 20 Likes: 10
5 Senses of Heartache
Do you hear it?
Do you hear the tears of a broken heart?
Do you feel the chill temperature?
The chill temperature of a spot in bed that is vacant
You smell that?
The smell of depressants in the air of the depressed
You taste that?
The taste of lips that have all of a sudden vanished
Most importantly.... Can you see?
See that a liberated love which
Turned boy into man
Has left him in a relapse...
Of romance
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