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Goin Down

Poetry By: SGBanks
Poetry


Tags: Love, Moving, On, Life, Heart


I wrote this based on a movie I saw. This started out as a rap, but I changed all the words around so dont try to read it as a rap. I thinks its better if you just read it as a poem.


Submitted:Mar 23, 2012    Reads: 25    Comments: 9    Likes: 6   


Im going down down down
Cuz you aint around round round
And it feels like damn damn damn
Just know this just know

Feels like forever since you left
When in reality its only been a month
Just laying here in bed
Wondering to myself what to do now that u gone
Family and friends telling me to go out
Experience new things
Explore new people
But it would never be the same...if it aint with you
Two choices: either lay around and mope
Or put my heart on the table and hope
For the best that I find another you
But right now I find that impossible
And it feels like

Im going down down down
Cuz your not around round round
And it feels like damn damn damn
Just know this just know

Met this girl but she doesnt look like you
But she laughs and thinks the same way you do
Her heart was broken twice and same change
And she afraid to trust it with another man
I told her to take a chance to check out my style
She gave me a maybe but that was a start
Yet havent felt this good in a while
Its been a month since we been going out
Im liking her she liking me
And the relationship is to the point like wow
As i look at your picture on my desk my heart is saying oww
Cause i gave my heart away to someone else
Without getting at you to see how you felt
And im like damn

Im going down down down
Cause your not around round round
And it feels like damn damn damn
Just know this just know

As i dial your number i wonder how to explain
How to bring up this girl how to even mention her name
As you pick up its good to hear your voice but as good as it sounds
I have something to get off my chest so please listen now
I gave my heart away to this other girl
But i feel guilty for not telling you
So im calling to let you know its over, that I need to move on in this world
And she was like "I know...I did the same
While I was away I gave my heart to another man
And felt guilty that I didnt let you know before hand
You been good to me and I thank you but now its time to go our separate ways"
I told her I had the same thing on my mind
But more than anything I was glad to hear it coming from her side of the line
We said our last farewells
Now I got the urge to call this other girl
Cause now that she around
I be...

Going down down down
Cause your not around round round
And it feels like damn damn damn
Just know this just know





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