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Submitted: May 8, 2008 Reads: 51 Comments: 7 Likes: 5
Summer is very hot. up above the earth the sun shines
brightly covering the earth below in light and heat.
music plays at beaches and parks.
maybe I will go get some cold ice cream to cool off!
everyone heads to the beach to get a nice sun tan.
running quickly to get inside before the rain comes!
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This one was really good! You can never go wrong with ice cream as far as I'm concerned. Lol! Great job, John!
Posted: May 8, 2008
Very Good and very cheerful John! I want to go swimming now.! Haha!
Posted: May 9, 2008
It's always fun to read poetry where there is a formula used, as you've done here. Good inspiration and thanks for sharing it!
Posted: May 10, 2008
Hey, I like it. I wish summer would hurry up here, had a few nice days but its passed now. A nice read, good job! ~ Nixie
Posted: May 10, 2008
Oh OK now i get it! ^_^
I read this before but didn't understand the formula.
ok type on LOL ^_^ ^_^
Posted: May 11, 2008
hi! ss. u make summer seem cool and jolly. ;-)
Posted: May 14, 2008
Though I don't have summer in my country, I get the clear picture of the sunny weather through this poem:)
Posted: May 31, 2008
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