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Submitted: Jul 17, 2008 Reads: 84 Comments: 11 Likes: 7
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Hello Shreeram, I like this very much.
'then why over lies did men fought' should be 'have men fought' ^_^
this poem speaks very well Shreeram, I am looking forward to reading more of your poems and your article too.. a very warm welcome here ^_^
~katie
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
this is good. this isn't necessarily what i believe, but it's a well-written and meaningful poem. it's very good and i completely get where you're coming from:)
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
sheeram
i am a christian and have firm conviction for my belief's , i also believe that whatever religion any of us believe in , we must concede that god is love . he must be mortified , that man does the thing's he does in his name . innocent people are being hurt and killed , no matter which god we believe in , all of us must do our utmost to stop this from happening .
i am hoping you're poem is a step in the right direction for all of us .
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
I Also believe in GOD and I am sure GOD will give us strength and hope to fight against injustice in our own little place and society....
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
This is very good, I liked it!. I was going to add my opinion of what I believe, but I can't say just yet. Your poem made me think and now I'm actually asking myself 'What do I believe'. :)
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
YES believing that God is love will end these injustices in our society. Good poem! c",)
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
hi! shreeram. this is a realistic description of today's world. god gave man a choice - to follow him or the devil. in today's scenario, man is whole-heartedly following the devil. and look at the wars and destructions! when man mends his ways and returns to a true path, what u say'll ring true. thoughtful. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jul 19, 2008
I really liked it! It was well written and powerfl!
Posted: Jul 19, 2008
i liked this a whooooooole lot its true.....IT WAS GREAT :)
Posted: Jul 20, 2008
I really liked this^^ It was touching... and really kinda true :) There are some gramatical errors though, but they aren't that troublesome--they actually give the poem that extra something, if you know what I mean :) Really nicely done!
Love,
Crazy4Moony
Posted: Jul 22, 2008
GOD gives us everything and yet we misused HIS every blessing. great poem:) very provoking
Posted: Jul 22, 2008
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