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Drifting away...

Poem By: Simone Robinson
Poetry


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Submitted: Jun 8, 2008    Reads: 41    Comments: 4    Likes: 3   


Hi, a greeting                                                               

Hi- the answer                                                             

Walking together, rutine no dought                              

Best friends we say , we’r drifting away                        

Drifting, Drifting, Drifting                                               

                                                                                   

Close as sisters we use to be, now feel like we’r being replaced                                                                     

I reach out to her, she finds and excuse                      

I confront , she cries and leaves me bare                   

What have I ever done wrong?                                   

She’s my best friend and always will be                     

Although                                                                    we’r                                                                          

Drifting , Drifting , drifting                                          

   A                                                                           

      W                                                                       

             A                                                                 

                     y …………                                           


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Comments:

wow! i wish i could have thought of this!!!!

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you :D

very good. I LIKE

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you :D

that's so good keep it up :)

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you.I dont know what else to say

hi! simone. it could be killing when best friends drift away. u bring out those feelings very well. sad but a reality. keep it up. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much



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