My Inconvenient Truth

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Poem By: Simone Robinson
Poetry

Tags: father, dad, suiside, love

A tribute to my Dad... View table of contents...

Submitted: Jun 7, 2008 Reads: 49 Comments: 10 Likes: 4

My world was turned, undone, destroyed

Spinning into space

I sat alone, with just my thoughts

And tears my company

How could it happen? Happen to me

This was someone else’s nightmare

This was all wrong, how could it be, didn’t anybody care?

An accident my mother said

I knew that wasn’t true

There was something else here and now, an inconvenient truth

And when I asked, confronted, begged

What I dreaded most was true

In my heart I knew I’d known the shot was planned and done

Ending his life all for a dept

He couldn’t bear to face

There was more I’m sure then gambling dept,

But I will never know

And even though he’s dead and gone

He loved me…this I know

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Comments:

Aerion4

powerful...

Posted: Jun 7, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you

an0nym0us

this almost made me cried
...
ur words are really powerfull^^
i really loved it!!!
keep on writing =D

Posted: Jun 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you soo much, I will write more pomes soon...

yodahd54

powerful, sad

Posted: Jun 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you . I know that it is sad :( ....and true

Jade

Sad...powerful. Did that realy happen to you ???

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. Yes it did

lemonluv

loved it. and it was truly powerful. great work! =)
~lemon

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much :D

bubbly

hi! simone. ur loss can never be made good. sad but life has to go on. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah it dose. thanx for the comment :D

Enchantermara
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Simmone(sim)
All stories nice:) meet you on mara

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx again:)

Occlusive Catastrophe

This is really good. I think it's a really good way to channel pain; Really Powerful. Keep up the good work :D

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

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Occlusive Catastrophe

This is really good. I think it's a really good way to channel pain; Really Powerful. Keep up the good work :D

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much! :) :) :)

Occlusive Catastrophe

This is really good. I think it's a really good way to channel pain. This is really powerful. Keep up the good work :D

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

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