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I just hope

Poem By: Singergrlone
Poetry


I liked a boy and it felt like he ripped my heart out..... this is a poem i wrote during my heartbreak. But i eventually got over him and found someone new, he is the one who makes me weak in the knees now (and he doesnt break my heart) View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 19, 2008    Reads: 66    Comments: 4    Likes: 0   


Maybe we weren’t meant to be

I think about you day and night

I go weak in the knees when you look my way

I stay up half the night hoping that you are thinking of me to

I have never felt this way about anyone before

I get up every morning thinking about what I should wear

And how I should do my hair.

What do you really expect?

I’m a girl

I don’t want you to sign a contract stating your love

I don’t need a ring or the "perfect" guy

One day I hope you realize that I have fallen for you

[Ever thoughyou weren’t there to catch me ]

I don’t need bruises or cuts

Because your actions, words and gestures tell me it all

With everyone of them,I take a stab to the heart

But the way you are hurting me-hurts

I knew you’re a guy and you’ll have your "duh" moments

But the way you understand me- gosh it’s amazing

Love at first sight I guess

How can you like someone so much?

When they hurt you so bad

I can’t seem to get him out of my mind

I really want him to accept how I feel

And not make it feel wrong

I feel like…. Liking him is wrong?

Is it?

How can one day I sing to "Passenger seat by SheDaisy"

And the next I’m sing to "Miss. Invisible by Marie Digby"?

The truth is I will never stop liking you

I just wish you could tell me

If you like me or not

I wish that you would stop holding me

On a string that is about to "snap"

You can’t make up your mind then I will.

But I don’t want to give up on something

That could be great.

Well its 11:30.. and I have school tomorrow

I have finally stopped the rain drops

Falling down my face.

Now I guess i’ll just dream of you

And hope you do to.

I just hope……


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Comments:

wow, i loved it, i mean it just truly say how you felt about him, and i liked how you did'nt write in rhymes and stuff you just wrote what came from your heart!

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you very much =)

sammm
(not registered user)

its great but remember the promise!!

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

HAHA i know
I promised

Wow, Gina.
I loved it:]
You're really good, and I totally know what you're going through.

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Author Comment:

lol thx

a good read gorgeous , he'll be dreaming if he's got any sense .

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL well too bad he doesnt
Thx :)



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