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Well, i just love this one because it so so vividly describing the moments feeling.. it's just venting of feelings i've had for quite a long time in my life. And it is also special because i wrote it while i feeling boring rather than emotional (i only write when i am an emotional wreck:P). It's definitely from my subconscious mind, because my conscious mind was way too bored with the physics lecture i was attending. Yes, i did write it in my physics class, but hey, it's TOO BORING!!This poem is at equilibrium between old and new poems. Please do comment on it, and i am sure many people can relate to it too....

IT TOOK ME A LONG WHILE TO UPLOAD IT BECAUSE MY DSL WAS CREATING A BIG PROBLEM!!!


Submitted:Aug 20, 2008    Reads: 148    Comments: 4    Likes: 1   


God liveth in us,
guiding us with his hand,
but often times their is a fuss,
who to follow? God or our friends?

friends and heart, all are one,
following them i get a cloud of peace
but then i'll have to renounce god's decree,
i want peace, but will ever God accept me?

My heart is not serene,
for i follow God's commands,
will this go on till eternity?
Is this what God demands?





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