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When you are around (sonnet)

Poetry By: sitting ponderer
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So, this poem is my first shot of a sonnet. It is totally different from everything i have written so far. This is a Patrachan Sonnet; Shakesperian was way too rigid and hard to write. so this was my first try and it came out to be fantastic, hope you guys like it too. This poem is way too general and is applicable for any love story which couldn't get started :P i wrote this poem because i just missed a loved one, yeah, a girl, ah those sad feelings. Anyways, those sad feelings compelled me to write this poem so i dedicate my this poem to her, please do comment on it. By the way, this poem conforms to all the rules of sonnet.


Submitted:Aug 20, 2008    Reads: 251    Comments: 6    Likes: 2   


When you are around me, my dear,
I become free of the wordly fairs,
like heaven just opened and I walked through its stairs,
I feel impowered, but this world is what I fear,
why can't we both stay, and leave this world in smear,
oh why can't we come together and alight the flairs,
the ones which were off since the day I started my prayer,
for you took my heart, and it's reins along with my fears.
why don't we express each other?
The world will never come to an end,
this will just take our love further,
then only can we leave the slavish bonds of land,
But I fear you and the world's judgmental blunder,
for this I will silence, my heart, my brain and remain a bland...





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