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Submitted: Aug 16, 2008 Reads: 131 Comments: 11 Likes: 4
He said he would come,But he never did.He said he would stand by me...through thick and thin,through difficulties,and through happiness.But, he never stood by me.He said he would love me...cherish me...hold me forever...come what may!But he never loved me...never cherished me...never ever held me...He said he would come,But he never did...he never did...because...He never existed...!
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Sounded like a real dream that woke-up
Posted: Aug 16, 2008
I LOVED this one!
And so totally agree with poewhit.
Take care!
Keep writing^_^
Posted: Aug 16, 2008
nice punchline
that's what is wrong with an imaginary friends, they just let you down! :D
Posted: Aug 22, 2008
Oh men...this made me want to get rid of my imaginary best friend....lol. So true! Love it
Posted: Aug 27, 2008
YES YES YES...
THAT IS SO RIGHT....'he never existed"....
And look at me, a fool to even expect that he is there and listening to me...time to shed my beliefs and weave new ones....right ??
So what I am lonely and he never existed...i have my friends with whom I can exchange my creativity...what say?/
Posted: Aug 30, 2008
an imaginary friend must be better than no friend at all , i often talk to mine . trouble is , i often hear him answer . loved the poem . very witty .
terry
Posted: Sep 2, 2008
Wow... the Coup De Grace in the end was awesome :p by the way, i've never had an imaginary friend. Although one or two times i tried to make one, but they just don't EXIST :p i love my real life buddies...
Posted: Sep 13, 2008
Cherish yourself, it's much more true and worthy.
Great poem.
BUT, I think you have it in you to go deeper and play out more of your emotions.
Ex: (if I may)
this was a poem about a man who never existed.
what if it was about an actual lover.
why would you think he cherishes you?
just thoughts.
Posted: Sep 24, 2008
Your reply has arrested my thoughts for a moment.
I cannot imagine it.
CANNOT. Wow. Eye opener.
Posted: Sep 25, 2008
This one is really good.. But I have to say - you will find HIM for sure somewhere down the road..as I did... HE will really love you..stand by and face all the difficulties even before they dare to reach you..You will feel so safe that the only other time that would be when you were in your mothers protection.
Posted: Oct 15, 2008
this is so awesome, the way you ended the poem especially....but I have been thru relationships that have acted like this descibed....I like this poem a lot....I am still waiting for 'him' to exist one day, and sweep me off of my feet...but who knows if he really exists...only in my imagination LOL
x MEG x
Posted: Oct 16, 2008
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