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He's no longer in my heart....

Poetry By: SmilingAppearances
Poetry


Tags: Death?


I don't think I got this one right.... It doesn't feel right to me. I don't think I like the last line but if you read this go ahead and leave comments if you have a better line:)


Submitted:Feb 20, 2010    Reads: 91    Comments: 8    Likes: 3   


I scream

But no is there to hear.

I shiver

But I know there is nothing to fear

I cry

and agonize about how I got here

I breathe

Confused and surprised about my sudden cheer

I smile

because I remember him here

Then my heart breaks

because I no longer feel his presence near....





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