Page 1, I don\'t think I got this one right.... It doesn\'t feel right to me. I don\'t think I like the last line but if you read this go ahead and leave comments if you have a better line:)
But no is there to hear.
But I know there is nothing to fear
and agonize about how I got here
Confused and surprised about my sudden cheer
because I remember him here
Then my heart breaks
because I no longer feel his presence near....
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