A Dream Of Love

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Poem By: snowbelle
Poetry

Tags: love, hate, tears, dreams, need, for, answers

a poem of love,heartbreak and the need for answers View table of contents...

Submitted: Feb 11, 2008 Reads: 132 Comments: 5 Likes: 3

A Dream Of Love

Where are you now

You’re not in my life

Why did you leave me

And take another for your wife

I thought you loved me

With all your soul

To be together forever

Was our ultimate goal

I sit here and cry

I am truly desolate

I’ll love you forever

But I can’t have you

Why did you hurt me

Was that always your plan

To make me love you

Then leave me you evil man!

You had your way

I love you heart and soul

To leave me broken

Was your ultimate goal

What did I do

That you hate me so

Please tell me

I have to know

I cannot heal

I cannot move on

I have no life

Till I know what was wrong

Was it me?

It must have been

You were perfect

Or was it a dream?

A dream of love

A dream of lust

A dream that died

As a dream it must

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Comments:

A very powerful and moving poem Snow, I can sense the anger and hurt you feel towards this person. He must have hurt you very much indeed.

I hope you have the strength to carry on with your life.

Wish you better days

Your friend

Boneman x

Posted: Feb 11, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you boney. i am getting on with life. i have the support of someone very special to help me through.
snow xx

Jbortti

I love this poems of love , i think they are very special and you write them very well. I'm not so romantic and that's why i like to see people who express feelings of love , lost and disillusion so well. Great Dear snow!

Posted: Feb 11, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for these lovely comments. i'm sure you are very romantic, you just express yourself differently.
snow xx

mum55

You captured your feelings so well and so strong with thiw peice.....heartfelt write...felt the pain....to happier days snow......:) Juliet

Posted: Feb 12, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you juliet. your support is much appreciated.
snow x

gerabel

Well done, Snow. A lovely write. I felt your pain, your anguish and yes... your love! Although it is at times difficult to move on, a line from the song "Try to Remember" by Schmidt & Jones from 'The Fantasticks', has always helped me through the most difficult of times.

"Without a hurt... the heart is hollow."
I raise my glass to happier days as well.....Jerry

Posted: Feb 12, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you jerry. it is hard to move on but i'm getting there one day at a time. i have to say the support of all my booksie friend is a great comfort and help. am going to try and find that song and listen to it.
to better days......
snow