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Submitted: Apr 3, 2008 Reads: 86 Comments: 14 Likes: 6
Beautiful Love Poems
I want to write beautiful poetry
To let you know what you mean to me
But I cannot always find the right words
To tell you how deep my love is
Or how empty my life would be
If you were not in it
My days seem happier when you are around
Even days that are not so good you make them seem brighter
The Sun shines brighter and my heart feels lighter
And all because you are near
I wish I had fancy words to tell you how i feel
I Love You just does not seem enough!
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I love you, said and meant, is all you need but as you have shown by this piece you have more than that at your command.
Posted: Apr 3, 2008
Beautiful Snowbelle, simply beautiful.....
It is hard to express total love for a person, how you want to be with this person all the time, enfold yourself in them totally and utterly. Their smell the sound of their voice the feel of their skin under your fingers. The touch of their lips on yours..... Its an indescribable feeling.....
All it can be summed up as is "I love you" 3 words pure and simple.
You express your love wonderfuly and eloquently. Your lover is very lucky to have you.
Your friend
Boneman x x x
Posted: Apr 3, 2008
wow, this is really good!! Its like always trying to find the perfect words to describe how you feel for someone, but "I love you" always seems to fit the best. Very well written! :)
Posted: Apr 3, 2008
This is a beautiful love poem.
Posted: Apr 3, 2008
Romantic ! Whoever this poem is dedicated shall be very happy everyday in life!
Posted: Apr 3, 2008
I think you expressed yourself wonderfully with this one. Did you give that person the poem? I hope so! It was wonderful and would probably make their day.
Posted: Apr 4, 2008
Love is the only four letter that is important. Fine poem.
Posted: Apr 7, 2008
Hi Snowbelle - Lacey Cummings gave me a list of names to check out (I'm new here) and she said you were very talented. I think she was right! This was wonderfully expressive. I can't wait to read more!
Posted: Apr 8, 2008
Snowbelle this is a beautiful love poem as the title suggests. Sometimes the simplest words say the most.
Lydia
Posted: Apr 14, 2008
You must love this man very much to write such beautiful poems for him. Another great write.
Posted: Apr 16, 2008
Snow you write really beautiful poetry.
Posted: Apr 18, 2008
Moved me to tears truly wonderful. To find a love so complete and absolute must be wonderful.
I hope that your love loves you as much as you love him.
Amazing
Keep writing
Fie
Posted: Apr 19, 2008
Snowbelle this is a very beautiful love poem. I can see the love shining through your words, they may not be fancy or big but it is obvious. That is a real talent you have.
Posted: Apr 23, 2008
AMEN...MAY this relation stay with you with all it's freshness and love...and MAY GOD BLESS ur heart and soul with love and nothing but love...
MAY BOTH OF YOU experience the zenith of love and trust and MAY ur poems light up the candle of faith and hope in our heart and soul...
that is why i love to read ur poems...please inform me buddy when u post them...i sincerely love them....
Posted: Sep 12, 2008
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