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Did You Love Me?

Poem By: snowbelle
Poetry

Tags: love, pain, hurt, suicide, strength, fight

This is a bit darker than my usual poems. about how love changes and the effects it has....... View table of contents...

Submitted: Jan 28, 2008 Reads: 97 Comments: 7 Likes: 4

Did You Love Me

The pain and hurt you visit upon me

Tears the very centre of my soul

It shed the last vestiges of my self confidence

What have I done that you hate me so?

I thought what we had was special

I gave you no reason to doubt my love

I lie here in the dark and cry again

You tore my heart out and stamped all over it

I have no fight left in me, you win

You win, I capitulate, you win

I have nothing left to give, you’ve taken it all

One day maybe I’ll find the strength to fight again

My heart is empty I have nothing to give anyone

I cannot see a way out for me

I have lost the will to go on

Is suicide the answer for me?

Have you dragged me so far down

That death is the only way out?

NO! NO! NO!

My heart will mend and I will grow strong

I will heal and I will fight back

And you will never beat me again

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Comments:

lydia
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snowbelle, another fine poem.
lydia

Posted: Jan 28, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for these kind words.
be well
snow

boneman

A painful and harrowing read Snow, powerful choice of language as well.

Whoever it was must have hurt you very badly. You have the strength to pick yourself up and find someone worthy of your passion and your love.......

Keep fighting Snow !

Peace

Boneman x

Posted: Jan 28, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for your kind words and support. i will be back fighting before you know it.
be well
snow x

mum55

Snowbelle i agree with bonman ...... keep fighting and through it all you will gain strength....I know having been there once....My thoughts are with you Juliet

Posted: Jan 28, 2008

Author Comment:

juliet thank you for your kind words and support, it means a lot to me.
be well
snow x

QUICHE

this is a wonderful poem, but it is so sad.

Posted: Jan 30, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for your kind comment. i didn't set out to write a sad poem, but i guess it is. glad you stopped by for a read and enjoyed it.
be well
snow

snowbelle

sorry quiche i misread the title of the poem you were writitng about. this is a sad poem but there is strength in it.
snow x

Posted: Jan 31, 2008

Jbortti

Painful poem , but great ! I'm shocked , you are a great poet , maybe one day if you agree i can take some of your poems and translated into portuguese , and present them in a site of writers here in Brazil , saving your credits for sure! Great!

Posted: Jan 31, 2008

Author Comment:

jbortti. thank you for this. i am very happy for you to translate them to portuguese and present them on a site on Brazil, in fact i'm very honoured that you think so highly of them.
be well
snow xx

Lacey Cummings

You are very good at conveying emotion through your poetry. It's a gift! Great poem!

Posted: Feb 20, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you lacey, i didnt honestly think i was very good at it. this is a boost to my confidence.
snow xx

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