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Poem By: snowbelle
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a poem about how i feel when apart from my lover.... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 11, 2008    Reads: 69    Comments: 9    Likes: 4   


Empty
 
Empty is how I feel right now
Empty because you’re not around
Empty are my arms
Empty because they cannot hold you
 
Full of love is what I am
Full of love because I know you are around
Full is my heart because you love me too
Full will be my arms tomorrow when I hold you
 
Lonely is what I am
Lonely because you’re not here
Lonely because you’re a long way away
Lonely arms that cannot hold you
 
Happy is what I will be
Happy, you’re face to see
Happy that you’re close to me

     Happy to hold you in my arms once more


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Comments:

Lacey Cummings

Very nice job Snow! Another sweet, heartfelt poem. You always do good work.

Posted: May 11, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks lacey for this lovely comment. glad you like it.
take care
snow x

boneman
boneman

A moving poem Snow I can sense the longing and the emptyness.

I hope your arms are filled very soon

Your forever friend

Boneman x x x

Posted: May 11, 2008

Author Comment:

boney thanks for this lovely comment, that sense of longing and emptyness is a big part of my life. Soon my arms will be filled and the emptyness gone.
your friend forever
snow xxx

Buttercup

There was a lot of emotion moving through this one. I like it!

Posted: May 12, 2008

Author Comment:

thank yu buttercup for this comment, i am glad you like it.
snow x

Pratibha
Pratibha

i wish my hubby gets his head out of his work and looks around to see that i do feel lonely sometimes .....lol
what a powerful poem

Posted: May 12, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks pratibha. i understand what you feel. sometimes they cant see what is staring them in the face.
take care
snow x

Eric JHRB Egan
Eric_JHRB_Egan

Very emotional poem Soph, lovely. I know how it feels to be seperated from the one you love. 30 thumbs up.

Posted: May 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks eric. it is so awful to be parted from a lover and so amazing being together. thanks for the thumbs up.
take care
snow x

jadey oneil
jadey_oneil

Those are the lines that inspire a relationship to last longer...like the one you have. Wonderful poem! :-)

Posted: May 15, 2008

Author Comment:

jadey thank you for this lovely comment. i hope this relationship will last forever..
take care
snow x

stephhlebreton
stephhlebreton

ouu, I love how you mixed all the different emotions in one, very good and unique. LOVED IT! I'll be sure to check out more of your stuff for sure:P
Steph:)

Posted: May 16, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you steph, glad you loved it. hope you will enjoy reading my stuff.
snow

Jbortti
Jbortti

Beautiful and sad ! It's hard to feel lonely and empty . Great dear.

Posted: May 16, 2008

Author Comment:

juliano thanks for the comment. it is hard to feel these things but the being together makes it worthwhile. speak soon
snow xx

Lydia
(not registered user)

Snowbelle i just love this poem, the range of emotions lonely and empty with so much love to give. Lydia

Posted: May 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Lydia thanks for the lovely comment. i have a lot of love to give but spend a lot of time alone.
take care
snow x



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