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Poem By: snowbelle
Poetry


a poem about looking touching teasing and kissing, written for someone very special View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 9, 2008    Reads: 138    Comments: 11    Likes: 7   


You!
I miss your smile when you’re not around
A smile from you and my heart does pound
The love in your eyes does set me on fire
The glint in your eyes full of desire
 
You look at me in that special way and I’m lost
It touches my heart and fills me with anticipation
Anticipation of the fleeting touch
The one you knowingly tease me with
 
My heart flutters and my pulse races
At the thought of that first kiss
I close my eyes and I can almost feel your lips
The sweet sweet taste of them
 
Slowly, ever so slowly you lower your lips to mine
Featherlite you brush mine keeping me waiting
Knowing I want more
Knowing I want sating with your kisses
 
Take possession long and deep and sweet
Kiss me till I can think I can think no more
Sate me with your sweet love
Taste me, fill me with your desire
 
The more you give me the more I want
Wanton for your kisses and love
I just Can’t get enough of them
Touch me, kiss me, love me always
 
You know the effect you have on me
You know how good you make me feel
I never want to lose that feeling
And I never want to lose you!


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Comments:

boneman
boneman

Love it Snow !

So erotic and passionate...... Something about kissing teasing and touching.

Wonderfuly written you can feel the passion and the desire.

Ok probably need to go cool down a bit now !

Forever

Boneman x x x

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you boneman, she says blushing a bit. there is a lot of desire and passion for the recipient. i love him very deeply. going to turn my fan up, bit warm here.
forever
snow xxx

Pratibha
Pratibha

ABSOLUTELY AWESOME...
U know what SNOW, this poem conveyed this message to me that "YOU HAVE this PERFECT LOVE IN UR LIFE"
MAY GOD BLESS YOU SNOW...

MAY EVERYONE GET THEIR TRUE LOVE...in this life...

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for this lovely comment pratibha. you are right i do have the perfect love in my life and i am truly blessed. i hope everyone finds their perfect love, they deserve it.
snow x

Buttercup

Wonderful Poem! I love the last stanza especially. It looks like you were inspired by a lovely relationship.

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

buttercup thank you for this lovely comment. you are very right i am inspired by a wonderful relationship.
take care
snow x

jadey oneil
jadey_oneil

To love and be loved always bring a feeling of bliss. ^^
Nice one, Snow! :-)

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks jadey, you're right it does bring a wonderful feeling of such bliss. =)
snow

Dragonfly

Whew! Snow, I think I need something cold to drink now. Very sensual and passionate. I think this one is great for sure. It got my blood pumping. :)

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Author Comment:

lol, Df, this poem kind of took me by surprise too, it didnt start out the way it ended up. i am glad you liked it though.
snow =)

Nixie
Nixie

Wow, Snow! Very sensual, the love just shines threw with every word! Someone is very lucky to have you and visa versa! ~ Nixie

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks nixie, a lot of love went into this poem. i believe i am lucky to have him in my life. a love like ours is very rare these days.
snow x

Lydia
(not registered user)

Hot and sensual and full of love. You are indeed blessed with such a love. Lydia

Posted: Jul 29, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you lydia, i do feel blessed to have someone who makes me feel all those things and so much more.
snow

Classy Peach
Classy_Peach

How I long for this.

*runs away weeping.
(don't worry)

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

oh CP. i am sorry this upset you. i hope you find what you are looking for.
snow

dreaming of you
dreaming_of_you

simply delightful . look after each other , for inspiring poetry such as this i know you have found a good one .

Posted: Aug 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for this lovely comment. i intend to keep hold of this one. he is one in a million and i love him completely.
snow

Jbortti
Jbortti

Fantastic, one of the best! I like the way it was written, seems very special . Great Snow.

Posted: Aug 29, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks juliano, real glad you liked my poem. it was written for someone very special.
your friend
snow x

Pratibha
Pratibha

and u know what effect it has on ur fans...they are speechless and breatheless....the more number of times i read them, the more i love them....

Posted: Sep 15, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you pratibha i write what i feel for my special love and i guess it shines through.......
snow x



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