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Submitted: Aug 21, 2008 Reads: 92 Comments: 10 Likes: 6
Goodbye Sweet Love
Goodbye Sweet Lover
Miss me not
I shall return
Before you know it
Iwill miss you
With every passing moment
Iwill feel only half a soul
Whilewe are apart
Heart empty for a lover
Touched by lonlieness
Longing for a gentle touch
A smile to make me whole
Arms empty longing for a hug
A sweet loving kiss
A softly spoken word
Telling me of your love
Goodbye Sweet Lover
Miss me a little
I shall return
And it will be better than before
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aww this is so cute ♥
Posted: Aug 21, 2008
this was written in four line verses but when i posted it took a mind of its own, lol. i have tried to amend it but.......
what the heck the sentiments are the same.
snow x
Posted: Aug 21, 2008
Wow Snow !!!!!!!!
A very moving poem. You express the emotion stunningly.
I dont know what to say except wow !
I Hope your lovers reply comes soon. He is a very lucky man.
Forever
Boneman x x x
Posted: Aug 23, 2008
Excellent poem Snow. It truly does show such powerful emotions in it. You really did a great job on this. You truly have the gift of a talented poet.:)
Posted: Aug 28, 2008
Full of trues and very emotional like always are your poems. Great one snow.
Posted: Aug 29, 2008
wwwwaaa...me crying...SNOW forgot me...u did not inform me buddy...and i never knew...i was sick....
so was out of touch for a long time...
but me back now and
I LOVED THIS POEM...
i felt 'it's me'...and for sure ...when i have come back, i am much more in control....calm and serene...
or is it 'a lull before storm'?? LOl...i hope not...
Posted: Sep 12, 2008
i came back to read again...i have decided to come and read ur poems when i lose hope and feel unwanted...they infuse positivity in me even if we have never met..i get good vibes from you...THANK YOU...can i be ur true fan forever ??
Posted: Sep 15, 2008
Snow I really loved the heartfelt sentiments in this poem. I hope your lovers get back together very soon. Lydia
Posted: Sep 25, 2008
This is really beautiful.I like it,and its so nice.When someone is not here with us,then we miss him,its like that always.I guess,lol.Well,really beautiful poem. :)
Posted: Oct 5, 2008
Sweet loving poetry, well written is a pleasure to read. Keep writing.
Posted: Oct 21, 2008
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