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Goodbye Sweet Love

Poem By: snowbelle
Poetry


my star crossed lovers are apart again...she wrote this while she was away from him.. she awaits his reply View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 21, 2008    Reads: 92    Comments: 10    Likes: 6   


Goodbye Sweet Love

Goodbye Sweet Lover

Miss me not

I shall return

Before you know it

Iwill miss you

With every passing moment

Iwill feel only half a soul

Whilewe are apart

Heart empty for a lover

Touched by lonlieness

Longing for a gentle touch

A smile to make me whole

Arms empty longing for a hug

A sweet loving kiss

A softly spoken word

Telling me of your love

Goodbye Sweet Lover

Miss me a little

I shall return

And it will be better than before


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Comments:

aww this is so cute ♥

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for this sweet comment. hope to post my star crossed lover's reply soon.
snow

this was written in four line verses but when i posted it took a mind of its own, lol. i have tried to amend it but.......
what the heck the sentiments are the same.
snow x

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

Wow Snow !!!!!!!!

A very moving poem. You express the emotion stunningly.

I dont know what to say except wow !

I Hope your lovers reply comes soon. He is a very lucky man.

Forever

Boneman x x x

Posted: Aug 23, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you boneman, you flatter me. i am trying to write the reply from him to her, but its not easy. have never written a poem from a male perspetive. may need some help. i think i may ask my best friend.
take care
snow x x x

Excellent poem Snow. It truly does show such powerful emotions in it. You really did a great job on this. You truly have the gift of a talented poet.:)

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

michael thanks for this very lovely comment. am in the process of writing the reply...soon!
snow

Full of trues and very emotional like always are your poems. Great one snow.

Posted: Aug 29, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks juliano always good to hear from you. hope all is good with you. hope to hear from you soon.
your friend always
snow x

wwwwaaa...me crying...SNOW forgot me...u did not inform me buddy...and i never knew...i was sick....
so was out of touch for a long time...
but me back now and

I LOVED THIS POEM...
i felt 'it's me'...and for sure ...when i have come back, i am much more in control....calm and serene...

or is it 'a lull before storm'?? LOl...i hope not...

Posted: Sep 12, 2008

Author Comment:

again i apologise pratibha i never meant to offend you. i really hope you are feeling better now.
thanks for this comment, i like calm and serene its how i imagine you, lol.
snow x

i came back to read again...i have decided to come and read ur poems when i lose hope and feel unwanted...they infuse positivity in me even if we have never met..i get good vibes from you...THANK YOU...can i be ur true fan forever ??

Posted: Sep 15, 2008

Author Comment:

pratibha. i am so glad my writing gives you good vibes and poitivity. even though we have never met i consider you not as a fan but as a friend.
snow x

Lydia
(not registered user)

Snow I really loved the heartfelt sentiments in this poem. I hope your lovers get back together very soon. Lydia

Posted: Sep 25, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for this lovely comment. my starcrossed lovers are together again for the moment......
snow

This is really beautiful.I like it,and its so nice.When someone is not here with us,then we miss him,its like that always.I guess,lol.Well,really beautiful poem. :)

Posted: Oct 5, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for this kind comment. love is a wonderful thing and it can tear you apart at the same time. my lovers hate being apart but it is something they live with, one day they may be together forever..............
snow x

dani h
(not registered user)

Sweet loving poetry, well written is a pleasure to read. Keep writing.

Posted: Oct 21, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you very much for this lovely comment.
snow



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