
Random First Lines: You enter me like a dreamI see your soft pale face come's out of the darkYour hands are as could as iceBut I... : Erotica » Read
i wrote this poem when i was apart from someone i love very much and feeling lonely. i hope it goes someway to telling him how much i love him. View table of contents...
Submitted: Jan 13, 2008 Reads: 147 Comments: 4 Likes: 3
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A deeply moving poem, I can feel your longing for this person and feel the love you have for him.
I hope he feels the same for you, since you write such beautiful love poems for him..
He is a lucky man to have someone who loves him so very much.
More soon please
Peace
Boneman x
Posted: Jan 13, 2008
what a beautiful poem. you can feel the love in the words. more soon please.
lydia
Posted: Jan 13, 2008
Snowbelle another nice write of your love for the special person person in your life...Really nice read....happy days Juliet
Posted: Jan 13, 2008
I'm amazed at the sheer luxury of the wording in the poem. Nicely written, love the emotional attachments.
Posted: Apr 19, 2008
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