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Miss You Love You

Poem By: snowbelle
Poetry


i wrote this poem when i was apart from someone i love very much and feeling lonely. i hope it goes someway to telling him how much i love him. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jan 13, 2008    Reads: 147    Comments: 4    Likes: 3   


I Miss You
 
I miss you
When you’re not around
Your dulcet tones
Like gravel on the ground
 
I miss you
When you’re not here
I long to hold you
To have you always near
 
I want to know
You’re always safe
In that soft warm
Comfortable safe place
 
I need to touch you
Feel your satin skin
Touch your face
Touch anythin’!
 
The day is getting nearer
When I see you again
It can’t come fast enough
I miss you, my heart’s in pain
 
I hope our time apart
Hasn’t changed how you feel
Our little bit of heaven
That’s our forever deal


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Comments:

A deeply moving poem, I can feel your longing for this person and feel the love you have for him.

I hope he feels the same for you, since you write such beautiful love poems for him..

He is a lucky man to have someone who loves him so very much.

More soon please

Peace

Boneman x

Posted: Jan 13, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for your lovely comments. i know he feels the same for me and am lucky to have him in my life. this kind of love does not come along more than once in a lifetime and i cherish it very much.
more soon
peace to you
snow x

lydia
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what a beautiful poem. you can feel the love in the words. more soon please.
lydia

Posted: Jan 13, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for your kind comment. there is much love in the words and in my heart for this person.
take care
snowbelle

Snowbelle another nice write of your love for the special person person in your life...Really nice read....happy days Juliet

Posted: Jan 13, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you juliet. i really appreciate your kind comments.
take care
snowbelle

I'm amazed at the sheer luxury of the wording in the poem. Nicely written, love the emotional attachments.

Posted: Apr 19, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for this lovely comment. you are very kind.
take care
snow



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