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My Sorrow

Poem By: snowbelle
Poetry


Tags: love, pain, hurt, tears

a sad poem about letting go of someone even when you dont want to View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 20, 2008    Reads: 120    Comments: 12    Likes: 7   


Sorrow
 
So much sorrow I feel inside
Knowing I cannot hold you again
Or love you anymore
The pain is ripping me up inside
I don’t want to let you go
I don’t know how to go on
I sit here and cry all alone
I will not show you how I feel
I’ll carry on laughing and joking
But my pain inside is real
I won’t let you see how much this is hurting me
Cos I know it’s hurting you too
But I had to set you free
Right now I cannot stop crying
Maybe time will ease this pain
Right now I cannot see this page for tears
So much sorrow I feel inside


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Comments:

boneman
boneman

Snow, what a sad poem, it hurts letting go of someone. When they turn and walk away it hurts even more......

I feel your pain through your words.

Maybe letting go isn't forever?

Wishing you better days

Your booksie friend

Boneman xxx

Posted: Feb 20, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for these comforting words, boneman. it is very painful letting go. but maybe it is not forever, who knows in this world.
snow x

Lacey Cummings

Snowbelle, this is so beautiful and sad! This reminds me of an odd relationship I have going on in my life right now. I LOVE this one.

Posted: Feb 20, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks lacey, i was crying as i wrote this. why are relationships so complicated? if only i knew they answer...
snow x

Jbortti
Jbortti

Beautiful as you! Great poem , great mixture of feelings that some time seem to be opposite but are always together. I hope you are feeling good, hugs.

Posted: Feb 20, 2008

Author Comment:

juliano thank you for your wonderful comment. hearing from you cheered me up, hugs for you too.
snow xx

air
air

Hi snow :( A sad poem. It hurts to let someone you care about deeply go, one thing I know that can help is to keep sending him light (visually) this always helps to put things in perspective, it helps the pain and the lonliness cause by helping him you help yourself and he doesn't even have to know. Good to write and share with people* you are a good person and will learn to take the good from everything you do. peace, light and love sending your way....katie

Posted: Feb 20, 2008

Author Comment:

katie thank you for your kind comment. i will try what you suggest this will be a new concept for me but anything that eases the pain is a help. thank you.
snow xx

mum55
mum55

Hi snow....such a sad poem...when we loose someone we love the pain hurts so much and yes we cry....but we learn and time does heal....i wish the sun to shine on you and bring happiness back to you....in some way....your too nice a person to suffer...thankyou for sharing your sorrow..One day at a time....God bless take care thinking of you Juliet

Posted: Feb 20, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you juliet, your words are a comfort to me. i know time will ease my pain.....as you say one day at a time.
your good friend
snow xx

Kinkyboots
Kinkyboots

Snow, what a touching peom, I can relate on so many levels with this, the heartache and loss. Thanks for sharing this ~ KB

Posted: Feb 20, 2008

Author Comment:

kb, thank you for your comment.
take care
snow x

baisi
baisi

After reading this, I felt an ache in my heart, like mu heart had a hole getting bigger and bigger, tearing away.

Posted: Feb 20, 2008

Author Comment:

baisi
thank you for this comment. i hope the ache in your heart will ease.
take care of yourself, i will be thinking of you
snow x

Scribblings of a middle aged mad man
Scribblings_of_a_middle_aged_mad_man

Full of emotion, I felt your sadness.

Posted: Feb 21, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for this kind comment i was and still am very sad when i wrote this.
snow

gerabel
gerabel


The ache will ease with time as the great healer. Rely on prayer and friends to see you through your darkest hours for the sun will shine again.

A heartfelt, touching write.....Jerry

Posted: Feb 21, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for your kind comment and comforting words. it means a great deal to me to have so much support from my booksie family.
your friend
snow x

Irwin
(not registered user)

I guess this is something we all go through - sadly often more than once. Very heartfelt poem.

Posted: Feb 25, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for this kind comment. unfortunately it is something we go through i wish it was otherwise though.
your friend
snow

lydia
(not registered user)

beautifully written. different to your normal style.
lydia

Posted: Mar 2, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for this kind comment lydia. i set out with the intention of making this poem into verses but couldnt see where one would end and the next start so i just left as is.
take care
snow

NocturnalMuse

This was beautifully written.
It really hurts to let someone go that you don't want to let go.
I can really relate to this.
I bet many people can.

~mandy

Posted: May 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for this lovely comment mandy. i did hurt when i wrote this poem and it still does. i guess it happens to so many people........i still wish i hadnt had to let go.
snow



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