Unrequited Love!
Unrequited is my love
Sweet and Pure
As God’s white Dove
I look at You
I look at Me
This is How my Love Must Be
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something a bit different for me, a very short poem. please let me know if you think it works or not... View table of contents...
Submitted: Jul 8, 2008 Reads: 80 Comments: 6 Likes: 3
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Eric JHRB Egan
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Short and sweet Snow, I like it quite so much.
Posted: Jul 8, 2008
Snow I love this ! I can sense the longing and the passion.
The ectasy of being in love and the pain of being apart from your lover.
I hope that soon that love will be yours forever.
Forever
Boneman x x x
Posted: Jul 8, 2008
Oh, Snow this was wonderful! I'm sure that its a painful feeling to be apart from the person you love. This was simple, sweet and sincere. A really great poem!
Posted: Jul 17, 2008
Love is never easy, but what a lovely little poem Snow, you that feeling justice. ~ Nixie
Posted: Jul 27, 2008
Lydia
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A very sweet little poem. Lydia
Posted: Jul 29, 2008
Very nice poem, I liked. Hope u will read mine and provide more insight.
Posted: Sep 6, 2008
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