Please Be Patient

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Poem By: snowbelle
Poetry

Tags: pain, hurt, patience, love

a poem about saying goodbye to someone you love knowing you cannot hold them or touch them or kiss them again View table of contents...

Submitted: Mar 3, 2008 Reads: 1138 Comments: 9 Likes: 5

Please Be Patient

Its 2am and I’m wide awake

My mind is full of you

I lie here reeling from the events

Of the last day or two

I cannot sleep or will not sleep

Because every time I close my eyes

It’s your beautiful face I see

We have to say our goodbyes

Eventually when I get to sleep

You invade my every dream

No matter what I dream about

You’re there, you’re touching, you’re loving

It will not change the way I feel

But please let me alone

I’m numb with the pain of loss right now

Please let me heal alone

You feel the same, your face tells me so

But I cannot cope with your pain

I cannot comfort, I cannot hug, I cannot be near you

It hurts me too much

I’m sorry for the pain I’m causing you

I’m sorry anyone got hurt

You know my feelings haven’t changed just the timing is all wrong

With all my heart I beg you please be patient with me

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Comments:

lydia
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A very moving poem. I can feel your hurt. I wish a happier day for tomorrow for you. I understand your pain.
Lydia

Posted: Mar 3, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you lydia for this kind comment. i wish happier days for you too.
take care
snow x

boneman

A painful poem Snow, I wish for better days for you very soon.

If your lover cares truly for you he would wait until the end of time for you.

Better days and light

Peace

Boneman

Posted: Mar 3, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for this comment. i believe he will be patient and wait.
take care
snow x

Eric JHRB Egan

Oh my heart. So sad and deep snow, wish I could write this good. Please check out my latest anyway and humour me.

Posted: Mar 3, 2008

Author Comment:

eric thank you, she says blushing. i love your work i think you are really talented.
snow xx

poewhit

Poem has alot of sincerity to it

Posted: Mar 3, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you poewhit. there is a lot of sincerity and love.
take care
snow

Isn't it amazaing, Snow, how something as beautiful and "wonder-full" as love can take our breath away in one moment and in the next, smother us with sorrow! Your poem captures your innermost feelings. Your writing will help ease the pain by getting you through the difficult moments. Here's to happier days that are just around the corner.....Jerry

Posted: Mar 4, 2008

Author Comment:

jerry thank you. you are right about love. there are days when i wish i had never gotten involved with it and then other days it makes me feel so alive. my writing does help me through the most difficult moments, along with the support of my booksie friends. looking forward to happier days
take care
snow x

Lacey Cummings

Snow - You are truly talented! You always do such a good job of putting emotions to words. Everytime I read your work, I feel like it was written especially for me. This was a wonderful poem.

Posted: Mar 10, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you lacey, this boosts my confidence no end as i didnt think my work was too good. i just write how i feel at that particular moment.
take care
snow x