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Submitted: Jul 30, 2008 Reads: 101 Comments: 13 Likes: 7
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Wow !!!! Snow !!!!!! WOW !!!!! WOW !!!!! WOW !!!!!
Amazing and erotic. Think I need to go cool down for a while......
Your lover must be very lucky to have found such a passionate woman to write poems for him.
Love the alliteration for each line. So well written and hot. Your talent continues to grow and shine for all to see.
Now about that cold shower.........
Forever
Boneman x x x
Posted: Jul 30, 2008
a very sensual poem . flows beautifully , hits the spot .
terry
Posted: Jul 31, 2008
OMG! Snow your poetry is always really good, but lately you must be extra inspired because its breathtaking. You got my blood pumping with this one for sure. I think this one is extra special.
Posted: Jul 31, 2008
hi! snow. this is all too exotic. u've travelled the depths of love and pleasure. all my senses r awake now. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jul 31, 2008
i forgot to do this at the start of this poem.
this poem is dedicated to the one person i love in this world more than anything. he is the one i get up for each morning. my heart my soul my one true love. he is the one that can make me feel all these emotions and more just with a look.
thank you for loving me. snow x
Posted: Aug 3, 2008
Came back for another read.
Snow this is the most amazing poem.
Sensual erotic and hot as hell !!!! Then I saw your additional comment. Your lover is the luckiest man in the world to inspire such devotion love and sheer passion in you.
Did I mention I love this poem?
Forever
Boneman x x x
Posted: Aug 3, 2008
Very, very nice, Snow!! A beautiful poem with the vivid images of sensual pleasure. A delightful, exciting and pleasurable read!!
Happy days ((and nights!)).....Jerry
Posted: Aug 6, 2008
Why you little vixen!!
Posted: Aug 13, 2008
Excellent poem. So sensual and romantic. I really like this poem. Thanks for sharing it with us. :)
Posted: Aug 13, 2008
This is a very sexy poem. Did you read it to your lover? I bet he loved it. Carrie
Posted: Aug 25, 2008
SUCH A SENSUAL POEM...and the best part is that they are all honest...not fake....i missed ur writings...was really entangled in my self created problems...in fact life is all about enjoying which is what ur poems and writings teach me each time i come here...i go back refreshed....revived....and my faith in life coming back...THANK YOU..Sophie...lucky is he who is ur husband and lover and inspiration.....lovely poem....
Posted: Sep 15, 2008
Oh my word, this poem is so hot and sensual, wow. I like this one best of all I have read so far.
Dani
Posted: Oct 21, 2008
Came back for yet another read !
Oh wow I'm sure it gets hotter ! You can almost see and feel the pleasure.
I hope your lucky lover is taking care of you and is giving you all the pleasure you deserve.
Forever
Boneman X x X
Posted: Nov 27, 2008
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