Springtime

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Poem By: snowbelle
Poetry

Tags: spring, flowers, renewal

a poem about spring and renewal View table of contents...

Submitted: Mar 25, 2008 Reads: 570 Comments: 21 Likes: 9

Springtime

I see that Spring is coming

The buds are on the trees

The daffodils wave merrily

Blowing in the breeze

The nights are getting lighter

The clocks are soon to change

Parties in the garden

I can soon start to arrange

I must get the garden

Into something looking good

I’ll wait till the weather is warmer

Then I’ll just be in the mood

I’ll mow the lawn

And clip the hedges

I’ll plant some pretty flowers

And cut all the edges

I love to see the Springtime

The buds, the daffs, the sun

I see the children in the park

Running round and having fun

I like the Springtime showers

The wind blowing in my face

Lying in the park

Watching the clouds as they race

Sharing the new day with a lover

Seeing it through their eyes

Makes Spring a season of renewal

And pure unadulterated joys

That’s what I love about Spring

Everything growing and new

All the bright spring colours

Gives the earth a lovely hue!

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Comments:

Lydia
(not registered user)

What a very sweet poem Snow. I too love spring, watching all the buds and flowers grow, it makes me feel good.
Lydia

Posted: Mar 25, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks lydia, glad you enjoyed my poem.
take care
snow

Eric JHRB Egan

I could fee this, you really create the atmosphere, I could smell the daffodils. Beautiful poem Snow. 11 thumbs up!

Posted: Mar 25, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks eric, high praise coming from you.
take care
snow xx

Yet again Snow you show your considerable talent.... I also long for spring and the return of green to the world, warmer days spent with a loved one doing nothing but watching the world go by.

A wonderful write as always

Your friend

Boneman x x x

Posted: Mar 25, 2008

Author Comment:

boney, thank you for this lovely comment. am flattered that you think i have talent. i too love watching the world go by with my love.
take care
your friend
snow xxx

Irwin
(not registered user)

Delightful poem reminds me of how much I miss my garden - we live in a flat now! Terrible. Your poem was a feast of Spring. Thank you.

Posted: Mar 25, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks irwin for this lovely comment. i too know how horrid it is missing your garden. i grew up in a block of flats. i love my garden, i just wish i had more time for it. if you ever feel the need............just let me know. lol
take care
snow x

amateur01

sweet poem. please check mine out, called "from summer to spring" it's got the same seasonal theme yet i found it interesting to read your since the message is quite different.. :)

Posted: Mar 25, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for your kind comment. i will definitely check your poem out and comment.
take care
snow

gerabel

Oh... sweet spring!! I love to plant and tend my flower garden and box planters on my deck railings, even though I no longer have a love to share it with... ah, but memories are sweet reminders! Flowers help to show me how beautiful life can be. Your lovely poem helps bring this beauty to life. Happy writing, snow!..................Jerry

Posted: Mar 26, 2008

Author Comment:

jerry thank your for this lovely comment. i love to have time in my garden in spring, just sitting sometimes seeing things come to life.
take care
snow x

Jbortti

If i were the Spring time, now the trees would have more fruits , and the green color around would be even more green, because this is the most beautiful homage . To read this poem it is like to be sure that we can find beautiful things in the world and the hope of a new bright shine day is up to come . And the poem , i'm not saying any bullshit , it is professional, sober and just could be written by someone very sensible with an open heart to what is pure and beautiful. Great poem Snow.

Posted: Mar 26, 2008

Author Comment:

juliano thank you for this lovely comment.
your friend
snow xx

Lacey Cummings

I'm so over the snow and cold! I love this one! I actually feel warmer just reading it. You have amazing talent Snow!

Posted: Mar 27, 2008

Author Comment:

lacey thank you very much. it was snowing as i wrote this poem, lol.
take care
snow x

Eddie the 'ead
(not registered user)

What a fantastic poem ! The best I have read for a long time.

I can almost smell the blossom and see the springtime bringing life back to the bleak winter.

Wish I had a garden to potter around in but sadly I am without one these days.

Truly a talented writer !!!!!

Will read more soon.

Eddie

Posted: Mar 27, 2008

Author Comment:

eddie thank you for this lovely comment. i know how hard it is to be without a garden having grown up in a flat. i am lucky enough now to have a big garden to potter around in.
look forward to more of your comments
take care
snow x

mikedown

nice

Posted: Mar 28, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you.
snow

Alice Oiseau

loved it! man i wish spring were here now! haha. great poem!

Posted: Mar 28, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for this lovely comment. i too wish spring were here with a bit of warmth. i hate being cold....
take care
snow x

bookwormtom

Light-hearted and really nice. Thank you for sharing the joys of Spring as you see it.

Posted: Mar 29, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for this comment.
take care
snow x

Chris
(not registered user)

I really liked this poem. I can almost smell the daffs and feel the warmth on my skin. Despite the frost!!

Posted: Mar 31, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for this kind comment. glad you enjoyed.
take care
snow x

Bill M
(not registered user)

This is a very nice poem describing spring as you see it.

Posted: Apr 1, 2008

Author Comment:

thenk you for this lovely comment.
take care
snow x

mum55

Snow such a great write on springtime...makes me want to start and work on my garden,,,loved this....Take care Juliet

Posted: Apr 6, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks Juliet. just waiting patiently to get started on my garden, weather permitting.
take care
snow x

Cathy Chui

I love how there's a tone of eagerness. :) Great job!

Posted: Apr 15, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for this kind comment cathy.
take care
snow x

Amanda F
(not registered user)

I agree with Cathy there is a tone of eagerness for Spring. Sweet poem.

Posted: Apr 16, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for your kind comment. i am eager for spring as i look out my window at my garden in disarray and can't wait to get out and get on with it.
take care
snow =)

Liz
(not registered user)

man oh man your poem is good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I loved it soooooooooo much!I think i can already hear the breeze of the trees even though i am inside!thats how good you are! ;)

Posted: Apr 16, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for this lovely comment.
take care
snow x

phil d
(not registered user)

Hey this is a real cool poem. Can just smell the daffodils.

Posted: Apr 23, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for this kind comment. glad you liked my poem.
snow

tin2twinkling

i almost wanted to jump around in celebration of spring.. really great poem & so lovely =)

Posted: Apr 24, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you tin2twinkling for this lovely comment. i am so glad spring is here. i could sit for hours just watching the daffodils swaying in the breeze, lol.
take care
snow =) x