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Strength Through Contact

Poem By: snowbelle
Poetry


a poem about taking strength from the contact with a lover View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 14, 2008    Reads: 73    Comments: 15    Likes: 9   


Strength Through Contact
The need for contact
However brief
The time we share
Stolen like a thief
A thief in the night
You steal into my dream
You make everything feel right
No matter how bad they seem
No matter how bad the argument
No matter how scary the fight
I close my eyes and see you
And know I can cope alright
You share yourself unreservedly
Your strength you give to me
You help me through
A way out you let me see
You give me such strength
To see this through
All because of the love
I get from you


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Comments:

Irwin
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Such realtionships are to be cherished and the sentiments are so true. Like this.

Posted: Apr 14, 2008

Author Comment:

irwin thanks for the comment. i cherish this relationship with all my heart. this is the one that sees me through the darkest of times.
sorry you couldn't read it first time. had a bit of bother seeing it myself. it was in a 4 line verse to start with but changed to this format when i amended the font size. oh to be more technically minded!!
take care
snow x

Lydia
(not registered user)

A great poem. You are so lucky to have someone like that in your life, someone to lean on and take strength from.
Lydia

Posted: Apr 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for the comment lydia. i am indeed very lucky to have this person in my life. he is my rock.
take care
snow x

A wonderful poem yet again Snow.......

We all need a rock to cling to when the storms blow in. Even when its calm a bit of contact with a lover makes you feel secure and safe.

You are both very lucky to have each other.

Your friend

Boneman x x x

Posted: Apr 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for this kind comment boney. i am very glad i have my rock he sees me through some very bad times and i hope i do the same for him, and i know i am very lucky to have him i just hope he feels the same for me.
take care
your friend
snow xxx

Another winner, Snow. Isn't it wonderful to have someone special to lean on and learn from. Happy writing.....Jerry

Posted: Apr 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for this lovely comment jerry. it is indeed wonderful to have someone like this.
take care
snow x

A lovely poem Snowbelle expressed simply but with deep feeling.

Posted: Apr 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you anna therese for this lovely comment. i find that if i try to use too many fancy words i get lost so i stick to simple words.
take care
snow x

You're so lucky to have this person, as you well know.
This is really pretty and you can tell you put your heart in it. Great job!

Posted: Apr 14, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you dragonfly for this lovely comment. i believe i am the luckiest person alive to have found him.
take care
snow x

That was sweet. Did he like it? (Great job Snow!)

Posted: Apr 15, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks lacey. i think he liked it very much.
take care
snow x

Amanda F
(not registered user)

Take strength from where you can and if you have a man to lean on even better. Great poetry.

Posted: Apr 16, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for this kind comment. I do take strength from him and he knows he can lean on me. we are a great partnership.
take care
snow

Aw, Snow you said it all, only takes one person to change the world huh? This is a lovely poem. :) ~ Nixie

Posted: Apr 16, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks nixie. this one person has changed my world completely and i lean on him more than he realises.
take care
snow x

what a wonderful poem! You really expressed your feelings well, and i enjoyed it!

Posted: Apr 17, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for this lovely comment i an glad you enjoyed my poem.
take care
snow x

Danika
(not registered user)

Another nice poem about your lover. How lucky you are to have someone to lean on.
D

Posted: Apr 18, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for this kind comment. i am indeed lucky to have him to lean on.
take care
snow x

Romantic ! Passionate like you always do in your poems.

Posted: Apr 18, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you juliano for this lovely comment.
take care
snow xx

It hurts so bad to just have a few stolen moments. The longing is unbearable. I liked this poem quite a bit. It reminded me of a time of my life that is now past, but it was breathtaking while it was there.

Posted: May 6, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you buttercup for this comment. every second together is as precious as life itself and gives me the strength to carry on.
take care
snow x

What a lovely tribute to this special person in your life Snow. You're both very lucky to have each other. ~ Gypsy

Posted: May 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for this lovely comment Gypsy. We are very lucky to have each other. He lights up my days.
take care
snow x

powerful and soul stirrer...

Posted: May 20, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks pratibha. your comment is much appreciated. Strength freely given to support and love another is a precious gift.
Snow x



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