
Random First Lines: Derest Ana,I've betrayed youonce, yet again.IN the mirror,you've shown me truth.Though I was blindand did not... : Young Adult » Read
this is the poem i wrote after seesawmaes challenge. this is the picture she sent me. View table of contents...
Submitted: May 28, 2008 Reads: 87 Comments: 10 Likes: 4
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What can I say Snow?
This is brilliant ! Very moving as well for many reasons. You have excelled yourself.
Your talent continues to grow and florish.
Your forever friend
Boneman x x x
Posted: May 28, 2008
wow, you did an amazing job! i'm so impressed!!! Such a great analogy of the picture, so much depth... so great! You successfully did the challenge! Also, i'm planning on collecting all the pieces people write and posting them in a novel on my page, so that everyone can see them, but i need your permission to put your piece in, if that is okay. i don't want you to think i'm stealing it, which i am not.
Posted: May 28, 2008
I'm crying! So so sad! I would think a child would be less likely to lie than an adult these days. *off to go cry some more*
Posted: May 28, 2008
That was very moving Snow, especially the ending. Its a terrible thing to think about the way some adults mistreat children. You did a great job with the challenge.
Posted: May 29, 2008
wow. one of the very best poems you have written. very haunting. Lydia
Posted: May 29, 2008
This certainly was not an easy pic....lol
I am mesmerised...at the depth and intensity....drowned in the meaning...such an honest poem....
Posted: May 29, 2008
Hi snow ! What a beautiful and sad poem . You gave a lot of emotions to your words that always come out from the heart . Hope you are well !
Posted: May 31, 2008
SNOW YOU HAVE EXCELLED YOURSELF WITH THIS POEM.....SUCH EMOTION....AND TRUTH.....GREAT WRITE...TIL LATER TAKE CARE JULIET
Posted: Jun 3, 2008
Wow, you really did the picture justice. Very emotionally charged. Dani
Posted: Jun 4, 2008
Picture really fitted to your poem.And poem is really great,and sad.Its sometimes like that.And its so sad.You really did a great job.
:)
Posted: Oct 5, 2008
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