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Submitted: Mar 11, 2008 Reads: 130 Comments: 12 Likes: 5
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Very good snow, very you which I like. Please check out some more of my I put up 4 poems today.
Posted: Mar 11, 2008
Nice imagery! I think you do a good job of expressing the power and beauty of the storm.
Posted: Mar 11, 2008
Snow, once again a wonderful poem ! I love the descriptive words "As I watch this tumultuous show
But now I’m mesmerised and petrified By the colours of the storm"
Such power in the image. A truly fantastic write.
More please as you are very talented.
Your booksie friend
Boneman x x x
Posted: Mar 11, 2008
After a storm comes the light ! I think that life it is this way we got bad moments , and after it comes the good times. You did a great work here, you're a such great poetry!
Posted: Mar 11, 2008
Snow, I liked this poem very much. I can close my eyes and see the storm. I am glad you got over your fear of storms. Keep on writing like this you are great at it.
Lydia
Posted: Mar 11, 2008
Did you get much of the storm the other night in the UK? It was awful, I had to drive in it! This was a descriptive read, I really enjoyed it Snow! :) ~ Nixie
Posted: Mar 11, 2008
The sky, the wind, ther storm, the clouds, etc. all so descriptive! an enjoyable, simple poem that makes for a pleasant read!.....Jerry
Posted: Mar 12, 2008
Snow a really wonderful discriptive poem one of my favourites i have to say.....:) happy days Juliet
Posted: Mar 13, 2008
Amazing vivid imagery. Great poem.
D =)
Posted: Mar 31, 2008
Another good one Snow. You can feel the storm coming in. It also occured to me that it could be a metaphor for some deeper emotions. Nice job.
Posted: Apr 13, 2008
A very descriptive poem. I like it.
Posted: Apr 16, 2008
This was really pretty. I could feel the tension from the storm. Are you normally scared of storms? I have a very healthy respect for them myself. I love them from a little distance. - Rose @~
Posted: May 9, 2008
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