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a poem i have written in french. sorry no translation, and a major apology if my grammar is off. been a long time since i studied french. hope you enjoy...the translation has now been posted. hope you enjoy that too. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 5, 2008    Reads: 353    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   


 

Tu
 
Tu es le vie de ma couer
Tu es ma raison d’etre
Je t’aime avec tout ma vie
Que fais je quand tu n’est pas ici
 
 
Est-ce que tu m’aime?
Est-ce que tu me veux
Je t’aime pour tout ma vie
Je t’aime avec tout ma couer
 
 
Tu dis oui at ma couer chanter
Je suis le plus heureux ce jour
Les mot pas dire que heureux je suis
Mon amour je t’aime plus que ma vie
 
 
Le jour est plus jolie quand tu es ici
La nuit est plein d’amoure
Tu me fais en feu avec un air d’amour
Est-ce que tu me vue avec les yeux d’amour?
 
 
Les oiseaux chanter d’amour quand tu arriver dans la piece
Le soleil brillesur ton visage
Le vent s’arette a entendrer ton voix
Je te vue et le monde est une place de joie


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Tres Bon Snow ! Tres Tres bon c'est manifique

really loved this poem Snow, it resounds with such passion and love. Whoever it is written for he is a very lucky man to inspire such passion and such beautiful poetry.

A truly lucky man !

More soon please

Peace

Boneman x

Posted: Feb 5, 2008

Author Comment:

merci beaucoup boney. there is a lot of love and passion in this poem. the person i write for inspires me.
more coming........in english though.
be well
snow x

Snow (whine) how is the rest of us dummies spose to know what delights you have written down? :)

that's ok, I can read and get the gist a little bit. :) I am sure it is very lovely :)

Posted: Feb 5, 2008

Author Comment:

air, i will do my best to translate and put on tomorrow, just doesnt seem so romantic in english!! took me days and my sons french dictionary to get this poem on paper, lol
be well
snow

lydia
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a truly beautiful poem both in french and english.
your friend
lydia

Posted: Feb 7, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for your very kind comment lydia.
be well
snow

I prefer readin it in French, it's very sensual :) ~ KB

Posted: Feb 8, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you. i too prefer reading it in french. so does the recipient. i think it loses something in the translation, maybe its because i wrote it in french then translated it to english.
snow

roberto
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thank you for showing people how to read poems in french its just a wonderful thing and poems make my life happy full with life and love and specially when i read poems like in french and whan i give it to someone its really mening full to them and it really touches their heart and my heart i love all french poems

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for this really lovely comment. i believe french is such a beautiful language. very romantic. i love to sing in french. i just wish i could speak it better but i am practising. thanks again for reading/
snow



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