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Submitted: Jul 28, 2008 Reads: 113 Comments: 8 Likes: 6
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Wow ! Snow you have staggered me yet again.
How can a soul be lost when it has found a soul mate?
A kindred soul can soothe many wounds and give you a reason to live and to love.
Your talent continues to shine Snow.
Awesome
Forever
Boneman x x x
Posted: Jul 28, 2008
Snow this is really beautiful. Its so heartfelt and wonderful. There's a very real sense of longing and need in it that you put nicely to words. I love this one Snow.
Posted: Jul 28, 2008
I sincerely pray that they should never forget each other whatever happens...even after getting closer...
we take things for granted as humans and that is where we lose so many things.
life is so short...the moment we know each other and find comfort, we become restless and our mind starts it's quest again instead of basking in the radiance of a life time relation...
lol...i don't know what I am blabbering...hope i made sense buddy
Posted: Jul 28, 2008
Snowbelle I believe this is one of the best poems you have written. Very emotional, showing how two damaged souls can find love and trust again. This one just blew me away. Lydia
Posted: Jul 29, 2008
A little gem, snow! A "wonder-full" read. Happy days.....Jerry (^_^)
Posted: Jul 29, 2008
Eeeeeek!
Another knock out!
Bam! Right in the kisser.
Fav: Falling in love
Not realising it
So true to life Snow!!
Posted: Aug 13, 2008
Sophie, i came back again and read this one in a new light...a new light of hope and love...the current situation between me and my hubby is this...
i will make him read this tonight for sure to assure him that no matter what the situation is today, tomorrow will be better...this poem summarises my feelings for him too....
you sure are an amazing writer and know how to write to make ur readers' take charge of their lives , to pause and think about themselves as a human being and accept the faults and move on WITH THEIR LIFE PARTNERS....in this world of disbelief and divorce, poems like this REVIVE faith, love and everything...
me getting sentimental...
can i hug u tight??
Posted: Sep 15, 2008
Snowbelle, this poem is so sad and true of today. So many people end up being taken for advantage by the one they love that that love dies. Hurt and disillusionment can only be understood by someone who has gone through the same. My favorite line is Falling in Love, Not Realising It.
Hope it works out.
Dani
Posted: Oct 21, 2008
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