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Unanswered

Poem By: snowbelle
Poetry


A list of questions you ask as you watch love die......... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 18, 2008    Reads: 55    Comments: 6    Likes: 5   


Unanswered
 
Why do you lie to me?
 What did I do to deserve the lies?
Why do you want to hurt me?
What did I do to deserve this hurt?
Why do the lies trip off your tongue?
What can I do to change it?
Why does the hurt still burn?
What is the answer?
Why do I not just walk away?
What can I do to make you love me?
Why am I not strong enough to walk away?
What is the answer?
Why am I torturing myself?
What is the answer?
Why am I not good enough?
What can I do to change?
Why won’t you be honest with me?
What is the answer? What is the answer?


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Comments:

Oh Snow....... I wish I could wave a magic wand and take the hurt away from you forever.

Your poem made me cry as I feel you cried when you wrote it. Sadly I feel there are no answers which are going to make you feel better.

If only there could be answers there would be no more tears cried over love and hearts.

Be strong Snow better days will come and love will heal you I pray.

You deserve love and happiness and it will come to you.

Your forever friend

Boneman x x x

Posted: May 18, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you boney, these kind words and thoughts mean a lot to me. i think i have a lot more crying to do before moving on but....
forever your friend
snow xxx

Lydia
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Snow, how very sad. So many questions and no answers. I hope you do find your answers and the happiness you crave. Lydia

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for reading lydia. maybe one day...
snow x

U know what Snow, this poem defines my life as well in nutshell and finally one sunny morning , i decided to put an end to it....by being strong and by being JUST ME....

i devoted myself to this relation and so i was taken for granted...now that i am strong to keep myself going...and away from depression, i will be a different person and will live for GOD, My parents,myself and my son....

i know i am being selfish but i think i shoud have done this long time ago....

See Snow, ur poem brought out the truth of my life...thanks for such a lovey poem which will always remind me to be MYSELF and never never to lose self esteem at any cost....
thanks snow...thanks a lot....

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

oh pratibha.....thank you for this comment and understanding. I am so glad you have found your stength. Keep on being yourself you are wonderful.
Snow x

Oh YES... there are answers snow!!! First... you must believe in yourself... you are a beautiful person and YOU comes first! Secondly, we all know when a relationship is not working but we tell ourselves that we will stick it out and make it work when deep down insiode we know that ain't gonna' happen!! And finally, most of us become aware of when it's time to walk away from a destructive relationship but few of us take that walk, hoping for a miracle.

Believe in yourself and all you have to give and share... but with someone who not only appreciates you but offers you their best in return!!!

A soul searching write, snow. I hope you discover the beautiful strength within you to move on to better days. Love and peace.....Jerry

Posted: May 20, 2008

Author Comment:

jerry thank you for your very kind words and support. I guess timing is a big part of it. and fear. i will get to where i want to be.
snow x

This one brought a lump to my throat. Very sad with lots of raw emotion. It's a wonderful poem, I just hope you're not this sad.

Posted: May 20, 2008

Author Comment:

lacey thanks for this comment. I am not this sad. most of the time.
snow xx

Snow, Snow ! I'm very touched with it. It is too said and we are not prepared to face this situation. I wish you all the best things in the world . Great one .

Posted: May 21, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks juliano for reading. i dont think you can ever be prepared for this situation, i guess you just have to wing it.
hugs
snow xx



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