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Walk Away...

Poem By: snowbelle
Poetry


a poem about a lover leaving.. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 3, 2008    Reads: 100    Comments: 15    Likes: 5   


Walk Away..
Walk away don’t say goodbye
Don’t turn around and see me cry
Keep on walking out my door
Can’t be my lover any more
It pains me so much to say
You know it has to be this way
My love for you is always here
I know your love is always near
Distance and time won’t change how we feel
We know our love is real
The timing of our love is out
I Love You, I want to shout
We must go our separate ways
But not for all our days
Our time will come and together we will be
Happy and in love for the world to see
Walk away don’t say goodbye

Don’t turn around and see me cry..


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mum55
mum55

Hi Snow such sad heart felt words....and i hope your time will come.......happy days and sunshine wished for you juliet

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

Author Comment:

juliet thank you for your kind comment and best wishes. my time will come...........i wait patiently.
take care
snow x

Punishment

It will come. Just running a bit late. ^^

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks. i eagerly await......
snow x

gerabel
gerabel

Snow... This is crying out loud to be put to music!! It would make a great song, I think!.....Jerry

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you jerry for this lovely comment. my best friend said something similar. i await his musical talent to see if he can come up with something, please be assured i wont be singing it, lol. take care snow x

Lydia
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Another beautifully sad poem. I wholeheartedly agree with Jerry i think it would be a lovely song. Hope your wait is not too much longer.
Lydia

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you lydia for your kind comment. we shall see about putting it to music. snow

boneman
boneman

Heartbreaking poem Snow.......

I hope you find your happiness very soon and you never have to write another sad poem.

May you only write exquisite love poems.

Your friend forever

Boneman x x x

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you boney, this means a lot to me. i have much happiness in my life as well as such sadness. i will try to write an exquisite love poem...........watch this space.
your forever friend
snow xxx

Pratibha
Pratibha

my heart broke into zillion pieces and i am searching them all over .....

Dear Snow...what happened??

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Pratibha its a long and complicated story......
thanks for reading
snow xx

CrystalTears
CrystalTears

wow, this poem is...wow...so sad but good. great work!

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for this very kind comment.
snow

Raya
Raya


this good.if you have the time,please read my poem"it's your tur to change".

Posted: Jun 4, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for the kind comment. i will certainly stop by and read some of your work.
snow

Lacey Cummings

Hi Snow. How gut wrenching! Its very sad, but beautiful too. Hope some goodtimes are heading your way to put a smile on your face. As always, I love your poetry.

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you lacey, i hope some good times are heading my way, i live in hope. i am really glad that you love my poetry.
take care
snow xx

Kinkyboots
Kinkyboots

Aw, Snow, this is so heartfelt, every line leaped out and tugged at my heart. I hope better days are coming for you. A great poem, really. ~ KB

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Author Comment:

kb thanks for this lovely comment. i too hope there are better times ahead.....
take care
snow xx

apodiform
apodiform

Oh, so sad! The hints that love was still there but not right just makes me tear up.

"Don't turn around and see me cry" :heart cringes in chest:

Posted: Jun 6, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you em for this kind comment. the love is still there and will always be there.........
snow x

bubbly
bubbly

hi! a. u end the poem on a positive note of meeting in future. loved it. ;-)

Posted: Jun 8, 2008

Author Comment:

it is my dearest hope that we will have a happy ending..
glad you liked it.
snow x

boneman
boneman

Working on the chords and rhythm for this Snow !

Your friend forever

Boneman x x x

Posted: Jun 10, 2008

Author Comment:

awwww thank you boney. you are too sweet.
forever
snow xxx

Jbortti
Jbortti

What a beautiful poem Dear! This is intense and if we think a little there's a lot inside . To go away it's always hard and to forget it's the hardest part.

Posted: Jun 16, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you juliano your comments mean so much to me. it is hard to go away, and even harder to stay away, but trying to forget is the worst as the memories keep invading...
hope you are good
snow x

OliviaJane
OliviaJane

wow this is very powerful

Posted: Oct 4, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you. it was very painful to write.
snow



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