Submitted: Feb 26, 2008
Reads: 158
Comments: 9
Likes: 6
What You Are
You are the light
That brightens up my day
You are the sun
That chases my darkness away
You are the joy
That fills my life
You are the fun
That takes away my strife
You are the love
That fills my heart
You are the pain
That rips me apart
You are the strength
That makes me go on
You are my tower
When I’m tired and worn
You are my prop
When I’m tired and sad
You are the laughter
That makes me glad
You are everything
I wished you could be
You are everything
The whole world to me
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I so loved this made me remember a love i once had...great poem snow really liked it alot....well exppressed to :) til later Take care Juliet
Posted: Feb 26, 2008
Yet again Snow, another wonderful poem. Your lover must be the luckiest person in the world to be loved so much by you.
The simple language makes it all the more powerful. Sometimes emotions can be best expressed in simple words.
More please
Your booksie friend
Boneman x x x
Posted: Feb 26, 2008
What a feel good poem! Simple, delicate and just plain lovely.....Jerry
Posted: Feb 27, 2008
lydia
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this is a very nice loving poem, written obviously from your heart. thanks for sharing this with us.
lydia
Posted: Feb 27, 2008
HeY!!!! I loved this poem. By the way, thanks for the fandom!!! I have kept eating but im doing well. I have gone from 90 pounds to 115!!! YAY!!!!
Love
~Cami
Posted: Feb 27, 2008
Absolutely brilliant, I want to tell the love of my life all these things, but she doesn't want to hear them and its tearing me apart.
Posted: Feb 28, 2008
This one is so wonderful! It is sweet, tender and uncomplicated the way love should be, but rarely is. I really like this poem.
Posted: Feb 29, 2008
This was a very sweet poem, Snowbelle^_^. I love the last line, "The whole world to me." It's exactly what I think about my friend on the east coast, and what I think about my family. This poem made me smile.
Thank you for an awesome read!
Lot's of chocolate,
Ghiradelli Girl.
Posted: Mar 9, 2008
I really enjoyed the narrative in this poem. Vivid emotions. Nicely done.
Posted: Apr 19, 2008
