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Submitted: Jan 21, 2008 Reads: 489 Comments: 12 Likes: 6
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Once again Snow, a wonderful poem ! I hope the lucky person feels the same way about you......
I can sense the passion in the words, like a drug you can't get enough of. Sounds like a good habit to have to me.
This other person is lucky to inspire such passion in you.
Peace
Boneman x
Posted: Jan 21, 2008
The nice and sensual poem! I can relate to this! Good poem!
Posted: Jan 21, 2008
Well done, snowbelle. I can feel your passion!!
Posted: Jan 21, 2008
Oh this is real good Snowbabe, please check out my other love poems and give comment it would mean a lot from you. xxx
Posted: Jan 22, 2008
Snowbelle...another great poem of love and passion....Take care Juliet
Posted: Jan 22, 2008
I'm insatiable ! You wrote a great poem , i could see the the love in it . I'm insatiable because we need more poems from you! Gook luck.
Posted: Jan 23, 2008
another fine poem, i hope your lover appreciates the great poems you write for him.
more soon.
lydia
Posted: Jan 25, 2008
Very well communicated. Ricky.
Posted: Feb 1, 2008
Wow !!!!!!
A wonderful poem, erotic in its passion for your lover. I can sense your passion for him....
You are a truly rare talent Snowbelle......
Wonderful
Eddie the 'ead
Posted: Mar 28, 2008
I love this poem. It is very sensual and hot.
D =)
Posted: Mar 31, 2008
Snow - this is a really nice, heart felt poem. I love the length of it. Long enough to really get into it, but not too long.
Posted: Apr 13, 2008
Whew! Maybe I'm just having one of those days, but this darn near qualifies as erotica. Excuse me while I go turn on the fan to cool down. Excellent job!
Posted: May 30, 2008
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