Submitted: May 19, 2008
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Your Smile!
Your smile is a beautiful smile
It comes straight from your heart
Your smile shines like a beacon
The love in it tears me apart
Your smile shows in your eyes
It’s pure and joyous to see
Your smile brightens up my life
Its pure love just for me
Your smile can brighten the darkest day
Your smile can take my pain away
Your smile just turns me upside down
Your smile in which I could forever drown
You smile at me and I am bowled over
At how it changes your face
Such love and joy and happiness
Such dignity and grace
Your smile can take me through the darkest nights
Your smile makes me cope with the horrible fights
Your smile does so much you see
Your smile full of love just for me
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Aww, Snow this is so beautiful and loving, such a gentle wording which is masterful as the soft wordflow mirrors the gentle theme. Beautiful poem my friend. 32 thumbs up.
Posted: May 19, 2008
Aww, Snow this is so beautiful and loving, such a gentle wording which is masterful as the soft wordflow mirrors the gentle theme. Beautiful poem my friend. 32 thumbs up.
Posted: May 19, 2008
Aww, Snow this is so beautiful and loving, such a gentle wording which is masterful as the soft wordflow mirrors the gentle theme. Beautiful poem my friend. 32 thumbs up.
Posted: May 19, 2008
Lydia
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Snow another beautiful poem full of gentle love, A smile can change a life. Lydia
Posted: May 19, 2008
*tears in my eyes*
Why?
I am over whelmed with the honesty and the comparisons and positivity and the love .....
i loved every line....i don't know how to express what this poem did to me but my son's face danced in front of my eyes....
so pure and so divine....
Posted: May 19, 2008
Irwin
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Lovely sentiments, sensitively put. I like it.
Posted: May 19, 2008
a lovely piece. Amazing what a smile can do, isn't it?!! keep those smiles coming, snow!.....Jerry
Posted: May 20, 2008
Love this one Snow! This one puts a smile in my own heart. Your last two poems posted had shown such a wide range of emotions and you did them both justice. Such talent you have!
Posted: May 20, 2008
This poem made me smile even sitting here at my computer at work. It's so amazing how much one smile can do to change our day around. And if it's from the person we love....ah, heaven my friend, heaven! Wonderful!~Em
Posted: May 20, 2008
That's wonderful poem is we need. A smile that can brighten the darkest day , this is so good when in hard times.
Posted: May 21, 2008
Isn't it wonderful when a simple smile from that special someone can make you feel as if you're the only person in the world. Their smile has the ability to make you feel important in their life; especially when you're the very reason why they are smiling.
Posted: May 24, 2008
this is so wonderful! it did such a great job! keep it up! :)
Posted: May 25, 2008
hi snow a really wonderfull peice......happy days julietx
Posted: Sep 28, 2008
I think this is a positive poem straight from the heart.
A smile from someone special always makes you feel happy.
Posted: Nov 10, 2008
Bill
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Well written, expressive poem, for someone you quite obviously adore. More like this please. Bill
Posted: Nov 23, 2008
Wow very amazing poem, come check out mine
Posted: Nov 26, 2008
horsefallgonewronge
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Hey. I like this poem, simply because I can relate. I hope you get to keep your special guy!
Posted: Dec 5, 2008
Being in love with somebody is a great thing.
Beautiful poem
Posted: Jan 22, 2009
i've found this poem again and still love it. l'amour *happy sigh*
Posted: Jan 26, 2009
that was adorable...well writen and loving.
Posted: Feb 17, 2009
ahh so sweet and tells you all you need to know by someones smile. :)
Posted: Feb 19, 2009
aww that's cute...
i wrote a poem before about my bf's voice
lol
Posted: Feb 20, 2009
cool,smiles,happy,fun,laughter,excitement,SMILES.
Posted: Feb 27, 2009
WOW! that was great! it was rhymyy and still sounded beautiful, i loved it!
Posted: Mar 7, 2009
This is beautifully written and I enjoyed the imagery very much. I wish you well.
Posted: Mar 19, 2009
meaningful murmurs of a smile - beautifully crafted
Posted: Mar 25, 2009
Wow!!!! This is so good, i really liked it, such a sweet poem. check out some of my stuffs :)
Posted: Apr 23, 2009
this is like a song if u sing it! good job! keep it up!
Posted: May 16, 2009
loved it! I will smile at your poem for the rest of my life...ha ha
Posted: May 31, 2009
can i use your poem for school?
Posted: Jun 22, 2009
I love the poem! Its soulful yet heartwarming and happy yet sad.
Posted: Jun 25, 2009
omg that was amazing man i hope one day i can write something half as good as that i love it keep up the great work
Posted: Jul 6, 2009
wow! this is really good!
Posted: Jul 15, 2009
OMG THAT WAS REALLY GOOD WELL DONE SJ
Posted: Jul 19, 2009
This is beautifully written, and really conveys the feelings we have when we the person we love's smile. The wording was well chosen and thought out. The reader can tell that this person has a large place in your heart, just by this poem. It's amazing how something as simple as a smile can mean so much.
Posted: Jul 23, 2009
Please read my poem
What i used to be
comment too please :D
xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Posted: Jul 25, 2009
This really well written! And very cute!
Posted: Aug 1, 2009
That was a great poem! =)
Posted: Aug 15, 2009
vishal sisodia
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Elegant....
Posted: Sep 12, 2009
A very beautiful write. I really liked the rhythm and the verse construction. You did a great job. A pleasure reading.
Posted: Sep 22, 2009
I love it. its so gentle but your words are stone, like your positive on each line. when i read this poem i see flashes of the people i love, being happy and a rush of comfort. this poem is one of my favs. its like the world is nothing but happiness for a few seconds.
Posted: Oct 7, 2009
you my friend just brought the biggest smile to my face. What I love most about it is that I felt like you were speaking of me and now im cheesing hahah good work
Posted: Oct 16, 2009
Smooth flow.
Im repenting for having missed such good poem all these day. A newby in Booksie gets such lovely treats.
Gr8 job..
Posted: Oct 21, 2009
well done i loved this poem i can see you wrote it from your heart and its verry emotional and amazing
Kattie
Posted: Nov 5, 2009
Haha, hey, I like this poem! The only thing I have to say is that towards the end the wording was a little unwieldy, but, other than that, I loved it. =)
Posted: Nov 16, 2009
Great poem! Make sure to keep writing because you are doing the world a favor when you do. AMAZING, AMAZING, AMAZING!!! Keep it up 4 sure!
~Also check out my pieces at the username purplecow919-
Thanks for your support!~
Posted: Nov 22, 2009
this poem is wonderful it makes me smile and think of all the people i love to see smile
Posted: Jan 4, 2010
wow this is really good! i wish someone's smile could make me feel like that...
also, i was wondering if you had any spare time, could you please come check out my poems?? i've only got two up, but your opinion would be greatly appreciated.
thanks, and great work!
Posted: Jan 6, 2010
My favorite thing about a guy is his smile. ^^
Good work!
Posted: Jan 9, 2010
I've never really wrote yet read a poem with words of love and grace...yet my first one, you did a geat job!!!! Not really tried writing the field of romance, but this poem is really good! great job and hope to be updated =) take a look at my work if u get the time and let me know what you think..yet again, great work indeed!
Posted: Jan 26, 2010
jane
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This is amazing. I can definitely remember feeling this way with my last boyfriend. Definitely struck a chord, well done. :)
Posted: Feb 15, 2010
aww, that was cute!!
Posted: Feb 22, 2010
that was beautifully written.You have great talent.Keep it up.
Posted: Mar 3, 2010
As they say a smile is a curve that can straighten out a lot of of things!
P.s ur poem reminds me the smile of a certain someone thus making me love ur writing even more. =)
Posted: Mar 5, 2010
that's magical. i loved reading this. my favourite part was the part about dignity. beautiful. xoxoxo
Posted: Mar 6, 2010
Good one
Posted: Mar 9, 2010
I loved it. Made me feel warm inside. I loved how you created such a positive effect!
Posted: Mar 12, 2010
I absolutely love this, It's crazy how that one person's smile can turn your world upside down. It's simply amazing to me. lol :)
Posted: Mar 17, 2010
Wonderful, the imagery, flow, and creativity are the best. I love your poem and your style. Keep the pen flowing...you have talent.
Posted: Mar 21, 2010
I really enjoyed this poem. It made me kind of emotional but it also made me feel quite good, well done.
Posted: Mar 23, 2010
A smile from someone we love can mean so much. Very nice!
Posted: Mar 24, 2010
Amazing , you are talented and i can't wait to see more.
check my poems ...
Posted: Apr 5, 2010
Mrs kevein baby
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for all of yeah my fans up there i ju wanted to tell yo dat it is an amaz poem it realy touch my heart and for thosee who alway smeil it real greaty to smeil even thou you sad ssmeil
Posted: Apr 7, 2010
This is so beautiful and makes you smile as you read it. You describe how it makes you feel and what is beneath the smile and I felt like I knew who you were talking about. Great work
Posted: Apr 9, 2010
Wow I really like this poem. The words you used were so good. It all just blinded together and meant something good. Great job.
Can you read my poem please. :)
Posted: Apr 15, 2010
This poem is so sweet. I even smiled while reading it. Good job! :)
Posted: May 1, 2010
same here i was smiling too...you have sumed up the simple things in love..a smile...it was a beautifull read ..x
Posted: May 2, 2010
Great poem! Your use of language is beautiful, and the emotions behind it are truly endearing. :-)
Happy trails!
~AddyRose~
Posted: May 5, 2010
Lovely poem. Hope you're in love for ever
Posted: May 9, 2010
Really? Are you sure this isn't something you could just tell the one you love, or think to yourself quietly while desposing of a good beer shit? I'm really not an ass when it comes people expressing themselves and/or creating art, but this is unreal! I will call you "The Mundane King."
Posted: May 14, 2010
This is BEAUTIFUL!
Posted: May 16, 2010
Liked it :)
Well written. Such a heartfelt piece about something as simple as a smile.
Posted: May 16, 2010
That's Brilliant.
Keep up the good writing.
Posted: May 17, 2010
Such passion. Undeniable talent.
Posted: May 22, 2010
I love your poem. It really conveys your feeling for this person's smile and your love. Great work.
Posted: May 25, 2010
Very nice poem, it made me keep smiling too.Thanks.
Posted: May 25, 2010
i loved this! it is amazing how a smile can portray so much love. its an action better than words =) well done!
Posted: May 25, 2010
SMILE everyday
Posted: May 30, 2010
Superb! It must be a very beautiful smile that inspired this.... compliments.
Posted: May 31, 2010
an very sweet poem, listed with words of devoton and love, it shows how little a thing as a smile can really make a mark on someone and just a gesture like that is just a beatiful thing to show love :) plz if you could come stop by on my page n look at my things thnks
Posted: Jun 7, 2010
That almost made me cry and fit perfectly in the situation I'm in. Thanks
-Summer :)
Posted: Jun 7, 2010
Hi there,
it's a beautiful poem this one and very well done.
Best regards from Brazil,
Posted: Jun 12, 2010
very uplifting. A SMILE IS A BEAUTIFUL THING. RADIANT AND BRILLIANT. THANKS.
I ENJOYED THE READ THANKS
Posted: Jun 12, 2010
It a beautiful poem you have a nice way with words, sweetness just drips from it.
-Lizet
Posted: Jun 14, 2010
Beautiful! Love it! Well done...here's a smile for you!----> :)
Posted: Jun 18, 2010
Very good! Love it.
Posted: Jun 19, 2010
Joan B
(not registered user)
I really enjoyed reading this poem.. Your husband is a very lucky man to have poetry like this written for him. I wish you both lifelong love and happiness.
Joan
Posted: Jun 27, 2010
I was smiling reading this cos I could just see the smile on my friends face; it's like heaven.
Posted: Jun 29, 2010
Cute poem and it is true!!! =D
Posted: Jul 4, 2010
surrealist, you are. well put, so real, so surreal. i love it, love it, LOVE IT!
Posted: Jul 5, 2010
This is great. I've always heard others say a smile can make a difference in someone's day...Love it..Moses
Posted: Jul 6, 2010
wow that's a cute poem, may i ask who it's about?
Posted: Jul 8, 2010
I like your work, Snowbelle and so do a lot of other people by the look of it.
You use the words well and it is deceptively simple, but effective. Take care. Junegem
Posted: Jul 8, 2010
viraj(vasu)frm India
(not registered user)
this poem took my love back.
so thank u so much....n keep writing
Posted: Jul 10, 2010
live*love*laugh
(not registered user)
wow i love this poem so much. it was beautiful and it took my breath away... dont ever stop writing
Posted: Jul 21, 2010
this poem is amazing, u r an amazing writer it was the most beautiful thing ever!!!!
Posted: Aug 3, 2010
absolutely fantastic! The first two lines quickly drew me in..there was was no turning back haha :) great job.
Posted: Aug 8, 2010
Vanisha
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very good poem ...now i am also thinking to write ........great job I enjoyed it a lot.......thanks for writing and you too keep smiling
Posted: Aug 12, 2010
beautiful poem.
I LIKE!!!
Posted: Aug 12, 2010
Wow, this was beautifully written, you're a fantastic writer! I love it:)
Posted: Aug 17, 2010
superb piece of writing.love it.you should be proud of this.well written and versed
Posted: Aug 18, 2010
that poem is so pretty i loved reading it.
:-)
Posted: Aug 19, 2010
This is a beautiful poem. The emotion and the pace was great and I'm sure most people have thought about someone's smile that way so it's great for people to relate to it.
Posted: Aug 19, 2010
I loved this poem very good! :)
Posted: Aug 27, 2010
Simple beauty. :)
Posted: Aug 31, 2010
Very beautiful, and full of love! I love it, it is so touching and easy to relate to :)
Posted: Sep 1, 2010
such a beautiful loving poem. loved the read thanks for sharing :)
Posted: Sep 2, 2010
I love this poem, it's so romantic.
Posted: Sep 4, 2010
This is beautiful, I loved every line of it..it truly explains the effects of what a smile can truly do to a person..keep up the gd work..
MASSIVEM110 x
Posted: Sep 12, 2010
This was amazing great job!!!! =) i really liked it!! when u get more poems up please tell me =)
Posted: Sep 17, 2010
very lovely poem,great job
Posted: Sep 29, 2010
I love it !!
Posted: Sep 30, 2010
A truly beautiful poem, heartfelt and brimming with love, great work!
Posted: Sep 30, 2010
bright and sweet! :) love it! :D =P
Posted: Oct 1, 2010
A lovely poem. I understnad what you were writing about here. I think everyone has a person that makes there heads spin when they smile at us. Thanks for gracing my day with this poem :)
Posted: Oct 3, 2010
Thats sweet :) Please check out any of my stories or poems , I would appreciate it :) x
Well done on the poem x
Posted: Oct 4, 2010
I love it :) It is interesting how much a smile can do something like make you melt(figuratively of course, people can't really melt, can they?)
I love how it just flows, and it has actual feeling in it, unlike how some people make some poems.
Posted: Oct 6, 2010
Wow... this is such a lovely poems... I love it...
Posted: Oct 6, 2010
Ah... This Poem is just wonderful...
I LOVE it
Very heart touching
Posted: Oct 9, 2010
omg that was adorable! (: you did great work. (: Can you check out my writings? my poem in my eyes is the best thing i've written so check it out! (: thanks
Posted: Oct 9, 2010
nice..heh
Posted: Oct 18, 2010
this is really good! i know excalty what this feels like!
Posted: Oct 21, 2010
Wow, thats amazing!
Im new to this and could use some advice on my new Novel im writting, its on my profile, please check it out xxx
Posted: Oct 23, 2010
How sweet and simple. Its a beautiful work....:)
Posted: Oct 23, 2010
You must be very much in love....it shows in your writing! This is a wonderful piece....so uplifting, and full of hope! Excellent! ~~Mouse
Posted: Oct 24, 2010
Wow it was amazing!!
Posted: Oct 27, 2010
=) just reading it made me smile.. it brings happy memories of a loved one.. very nice.
Posted: Oct 27, 2010
A lovely rhyming poem, i enjoyed reading it and will look forward to reading more
Posted: Oct 28, 2010
awesome write loved the theme of this was so sweet and so much feelings in this could almost hear it said , was very beautiful
Posted: Oct 29, 2010
Hi, all those readers commenting on your beautiful poem shows how it has impressed them, congratulations! You manage to describe in such tender verses how a person's smile actually influences us, great reading! Cheers, Ana Esther
Posted: Oct 30, 2010
Wow...
it is amazing how One smile can make a difference,
a very lovely poem!!
Ill be Looking foward to reading your other poems.
Now im one of your Many fans
Sincerely
SirPo
Posted: Oct 30, 2010
I like this. Reminds me of someone I once knew!
Posted: Nov 4, 2010
simply sweet and straight from the heart!!! A smile is a glitter of sunshine that always warms you up, leaves you in a wonderful feeling!!! great piece, a special keepsake for sure!! terrific comments too!
Posted: Nov 5, 2010
Such a cute poem :) xx
Posted: Nov 10, 2010
a smile can completely change our world, well one smile changed mine and your poem put into words the same feeling that I had never been to explain:);)
Posted: Nov 10, 2010
Hmm, not a single pixel of punctuation? Shame...
Anyway, not bad. Nice to see a consistent rhyme scheme. While I was reading this I thought you might like to explore the ballad form. I think it might suit you. Check out 'A Slumber Did My Spirit Seal' and 'To the Cuckoo' by Wordsworth, or perhaps 'Beheading' by my good self. ;)
Also, think about using a consistent metre too, unless you prefer free verse. There are snippets of the ballad form already in this poem:
'Such love and joy and happiness
Such dignity and grace'
Not bad. Keep writing. :D
Posted: Nov 11, 2010
This a wonderful and a sweet poetry of love...it could be felt just by reading at it....
Posted: Nov 13, 2010
That is such a sweet love poem it gets to you
Posted: Nov 17, 2010
i really loved t it made me actually go back to all the people i love and remember their smiles and the effect they had on me. so awesome way of puttng that into words.. Keep up the great work.
Posted: Nov 18, 2010
wow this is a really nice poem, I think it's really romantic and beautiful :)
I have a question, how do you get your poem that way, with the spaces and breaks in between the lines, my poems just all go together like a story and that's not how I want them. Please, any help would be wonderful :)
Posted: Nov 25, 2010
Thats exactly how I feel about my boyfriend's smile. Thankyou for your beautiful writing.
Posted: Dec 1, 2010
I LOVE THIS POEM ITS SMILE :D XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX I LOVE IT PLZ READ MY POEM
Posted: Dec 2, 2010
I LOVE THIS POEM ITS SMILE :D XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX I LOVE IT PLZ READ MY POEM
Posted: Dec 2, 2010
its so wonderful. a smile can create magic!!! all the best.
Posted: Dec 5, 2010
d'awwwwwwwwww I can see why this poem is so popular :) its so heartfelt, and sweet. I love the rhyme scheme, it's nice how you kept that constant. Great job, I like! :)
Posted: Dec 8, 2010
Beautifully organised and thought. Also I like that it flows from one part to the other....
Well done (y) x
Posted: Dec 9, 2010
Very nice,
Thanks for sharing
Drew
Posted: Dec 9, 2010
It's beautiful!!
Posted: Dec 18, 2010
Very sweet, that reminds me of how my husband looks at me. The way its like he saves a different kind of smile just for me that no one else gets to experience.
Posted: Dec 28, 2010
That is a cute little poem right there (: very short and sweet.
~Alana cx
Posted: Dec 28, 2010
This poem really moved me. Thanks so much for publishing such a well-written piece with a positive outlook that has made it difficult to take a smile off my face. ~ Ed, http://www.warwickunbound.com
Posted: Dec 29, 2010
I hope you don't mind me being the one to critic your poem but...
I think the overall IDEA is amazing. But the way it's said coul be improved. Your poem is lovely my dear, but it's missing a good structural foundation. The formating is some what poor and so is the order of the...of the...Hmm. I'm afraid I'm not quite sure what to call it. I want to say paragraph, but that's not quite right. I'll just say stanzas. The order you have your stanzas in just doesn't seem rite.
It is a lovely idea, and the words you used, although didn't fully succeed, it didn't completly fail either. Best of luck with other poems.-Ariel
Posted: Dec 29, 2010
Oh and I don't want to seem like the one who's sad and depressed. But smiles don't really change me. To me smiles just show you if someone is happy or sad. Although my poems my not be the brightest things in the world that's not how I am. It's only how I write. Sorry but I just belive in constructive criticisim, and comments like "I LOVEEE IT" don't really help you improve your writing now do they? I'm a perfectionist and I just have to tell people strait up what should stay and what could improve. I call it tough love. Sorry again, I don't really seem my age do I? I guess I'm ahead of my time. Agian I apologiz for my constructive crticisim.-Ariel
P.S I'm 13 years of age, and I've met people who are 30 who don't understand half of what I'm saying because of my vocabulary and speach. So if you don't understand what I wrote, it's, well, understandable. Oh and a stanza is a line or verse that seperate a poem.-Ariel
Posted: Dec 29, 2010
Thats really sweet and I think it's really nice.
I prefer poems that don't rhyme but this ones actually ok.
I was hoping if you have time would you be kind enough to check out my story, 'The Ultimate Revenge' and let me know what you think. I'd really appreciate it!
Posted: Dec 30, 2010
Whoever is critizing your work, really has no room to talk. We're not on this site to judge people, we're supposed to show our works, and be proud of it. I loved this poem, it reminds me a lot of how I feel about a boy I like. And I fucking loved it. :D ♥ So, ha :D Good work!
Posted: Dec 30, 2010
Great description. Love the imagery.
Wonderfully worded.
Can u check out some of my poems (sorry they're so messy butt I didn't know how to sort them out)
once again, AMAZING.
:)
Posted: Jan 2, 2011
hi... I really liked your poem great rhyming and as well as your wording... I'll make sure to read more of your work..
(I was wondering if you could please some of my poems and tell me what you think... I would really appreciated it.)
Posted: Jan 4, 2011
Rugrats123
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That was beautiful, very well written. You are an amazing poet :)
Please check out my work I just started on Booksie with my first novel I hope you stop by on my page to check it out. THANK YOU!
Posted: Jan 5, 2011
wonderful poem bro :)
Posted: Jan 6, 2011
Nice job. No offense but I checked it out because I was bored but now I hope I am bored more often. Nice poem. I would like for you to give me your opinion on mine. Thanks :).
Posted: Jan 7, 2011
Gadianius
(not registered user)
excelent
Posted: Jan 9, 2011
A Smile is a persons biggest weapon in life. it can sweep somebody of their feet in an instant. nice poem , have really enjoyed it
Posted: Jan 11, 2011
that was a really good.....i luvd ur style... :)
Posted: Jan 13, 2011
this is a really good piece. well done hun ;)
Posted: Jan 14, 2011
Oh my Gosh, Snow.
It's a really touching poem.
The simplicity of it really makes it more interesting.
The meaning of the story really put a smile on my face.
I've been depressed for a while now and this poem really helped me cope with my emotions.
I'll keep on smiling,
Thanks.
Posted: Jan 15, 2011
It made me smile:D
Posted: Jan 15, 2011
beautiful i feel the same way about someone! :)
Posted: Jan 16, 2011
This is snowbelle at his/her edifying best.
Posted: Jan 19, 2011
Absolutely amazing, and that is all that needs to be said. I'm sure it made a lot of people smile like it did me.
Posted: Jan 19, 2011
Wow! I loved it! Really A wonderful poem, it flowed well....inspiring.
Posted: Jan 20, 2011
Unknown
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Wow ! i love the poem ! It helps me to my assignment ! it's an inspiring poem :)
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---- Unknown Gurl -----
Posted: Jan 23, 2011
Cool, Poem....I like it Keep It Up
Posted: Jan 25, 2011
That's such a sweet poem!I like it. I would say something really deep and mature but I'm ptetty young:D
Posted: Jan 26, 2011
I found this poem really cute and I will for sure check out your other poems xxx
Posted: Jan 28, 2011
your poem is very beautiful and realistic. it flows almost as if effortless and like it came from deep within. awesome poem.
Posted: Jan 30, 2011
amazing poem!! PEOPLE PLZ READ MINE! its only one but i want people to see it so when i do write more, more people can see. thanks and again AMAZING POEM!!
Posted: Feb 3, 2011
Just looking throught this site, since im very new to it . that was a great poem....
Posted: Feb 6, 2011
Amazing poem my entire family loves it. LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!
Take care - Snow
Posted: Feb 7, 2011
Love it- absolutely heart warming
Posted: Feb 10, 2011
BEAUTIFUL!
Posted: Feb 10, 2011
You know it's funny you should mention your smile. I mean being me, Zarah, I'm a sucker for a beautiful smile. This was nicely written! I liked it a lot! Great job, kudos to you!
Posted: Feb 10, 2011
My Opinion: the "your smile"'s are sort of annoying to hear every single line........but other than that, its awesome! i see you feel a certain about this smile and there are people and especially a certain few who smile is the same way to me, but you see writing is about expression. that means that you need to not only convey your feeling or express them in a story but make so the reader feels exactly what YOU felt. i understood what you felt, and thought of the smiles i like/love/have that affect on my but never felt a single emotion of YOURS. try to put some emotions in there.
I just tell it how I feel it...Please check out my writing and tell me how you feel it!
Posted: Feb 10, 2011
nice work.. keep up the good work..
Posted: Feb 10, 2011
This is a beautiful poem:)
Posted: Feb 11, 2011
This is soo beautiful...well done man xx
Posted: Feb 11, 2011
very sweet i love it !!!!!
Posted: Feb 11, 2011
Sweet♥
Posted: Feb 14, 2011
Miss Mey
(not registered user)
I love it.It reminds me of my BF.I miss him.I know the feeling you are talking about.I love the way you wrote it the words you use were great.I love your description.
Posted: Feb 16, 2011
wow!!you are so lucky to have someone who smiles like this for you :)
Posted: Feb 16, 2011
Been there :D Very nice writing, I seriously love it
Posted: Feb 16, 2011
So pretty. I really like it.
Posted: Feb 17, 2011
that would be SUCH a good song!
Posted: Feb 17, 2011
aww, that poem is sweet lol =)
Posted: Feb 18, 2011
i like your poem alot, very nice! :-)
Ive just written my first 2 poems, would you care to review them? particularly Bitter Sweet?
Posted: Feb 19, 2011
O_O
wow, that was good...my poems suck compared to this, lol
seriously, that was great! :D
Posted: Feb 19, 2011
you are an amazing writer, i probably should have put that on my last post :P
Posted: Feb 19, 2011
That was great poem! :)
Posted: Feb 20, 2011
That was "a" great poem! haha.
Posted: Feb 20, 2011
wow, good poem
Posted: Feb 22, 2011
Laci
(not registered user)
Beautifully written. I just love clever rhymes suchs as these.
Posted: Feb 22, 2011
Your smile, I'm smile.
Posted: Feb 24, 2011
It is a very nice poem! It is the smile of a person that can make one light up and feel so special.
Posted: Feb 28, 2011
I really enjoyed this one. A smile is something so often taken for granted and yet it can accomplish so much. Thanks for the reminder, I need to use mine alittle more frequently.
Posted: Feb 28, 2011
Rapheal Amara Jabateh
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I thought the writer was Homer. As i read the poems, i fell as though i was walking in a garden of love seeing that special smile from that special some one in my love.
it is really marvelous
Posted: Mar 1, 2011
Aww so cute great job! Feel free to check out some of my writing if you have time- thnx!
Posted: Mar 1, 2011
it was good
Posted: Mar 1, 2011
Aria135
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That is so cute if i was Older I would Date YOu
Posted: Mar 3, 2011
Love this poem!
Posted: Mar 3, 2011
Very sweet. I think its something everyone goes through sometime in their life. Great Job!
Posted: Mar 6, 2011
Fantastic poem. I love the way you captured how it makes you feel. Love it. Great job.
Posted: Mar 6, 2011
Very sweet.
Posted: Mar 7, 2011
That is an amzing poem so touching. Love it.
Posted: Mar 12, 2011
that was sweet and jeez it look like yaz got'z some fans here wow anywhoos I'm new here I like to write funny boatin peoms Maybee'z you can comes by and get yaz a laugh from yaz Old Cap-pin Mike
I'll just dig'z in mee'z pocket for sum-pin'z ya like!
Posted: Mar 13, 2011
omar rahman
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very very good and sweet poem.i love this poem very much!!!!!!!!
Posted: Mar 23, 2011
This sort of reminds me of how I think about one of my friends when he smiles, like just seeing him smile can make my whole day. I loved this poem, it's well writen :)
Posted: May 17, 2011
Very well written, it was a nice poem to read good job :D
Posted: May 31, 2011
gracia
(not registered user)
thanx
Posted: Jun 10, 2011
This is such a beautiful poem, as made obvious by the 200+ comments here and 100+ likes. I adore this, the only thing I would change is the term 'bowled over', I feel like you could use something a little more elegant. It didn't seem to go right.
But even that is a small matter. The poem really is beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
-Faith
Posted: Jul 1, 2011
This is refreshing and i love it. I don't usually read poems like these, but im glad i did. It's beautiful and uplifting. I enjoyed it very much.
Posted: Jul 18, 2011
Ram
(not registered user)
such a nice poetry....u hav beautiful mind thinking and thoughts...
Posted: Jul 30, 2011
What about his frown?
Posted: Aug 21, 2011
Awee so beautiful!!! That made me smile. Thank you:) I just created an account here, so I'm fairly new... Do you think you could check out some of my writing? I wrote two poems and one short story so far:) thnx. Much appreciated.
Posted: Aug 29, 2011
im new kinda and i realy injoyed this
Posted: Aug 31, 2011
Very sweet. If only everyone could smile like that, the world would be much more happy. Everyone is grumpy here.
Posted: Sep 15, 2011
brenda mun
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can i transfer this poem into a song. i mean..i want to compose 1 song and used this poem as my lyric..
Posted: Oct 2, 2011
Such beautiful writing god bless you for your talent
Posted: Oct 21, 2011
Hi Snowbelle,
I see you have garnered a billion comments. Good for you! It is a lilting, charming, and loving tribute. Just about anyone can relate to its messages. You keep it simple and straightforward too, and that is part of its appeal--direct and moving.
I wish you all the best!
Posted: Dec 19, 2011
great poem there is a guy in life like that but i quit hanging out with him cuz he beat me
Posted: Dec 25, 2011
beautifully written poem, well done!
-C
Posted: Jan 8, 2012
Smiles are really amazing, aren't they. We can all use more smiles in our life.
Posted: Jan 17, 2012
I loved this!!
Posted: Jan 29, 2012
Amazing poem. Good theme which you've explored in so exquisite a manner... Appreciated.
Keep writing.
Take care :)
Posted: Feb 9, 2012
nyc way of presenting of a wonderful theme... The best thing is its originality.. didn find any "copy cat" stuffs... good work..cheers..
Posted: Mar 16, 2012
smile...with love
Posted: Mar 19, 2012
THAT WAS GOOD........MINE IS TOTALLY OPPOSITE MEST READ AND COMMENT ON THE TOO :D...I AM NEW ON BOOKSIE..SO I WILL REALLY APPRECIATE U GUYS TO COMMENT ON MY POEM
Posted: May 5, 2012
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Posted: May 9, 2012
