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Your Smile!

Poem By: snowbelle
Poetry


His smile and the effect it has on me... View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 19, 2008    Reads: 965    Comments: 17    Likes: 8   


Your Smile!
Your smile is a beautiful smile
It comes straight from your heart
Your smile shines like a beacon
The love in it tears me apart
 
Your smile shows in your eyes
It’s pure and joyous to see
Your smile brightens up my life
Its pure love just for me
 
Your smile can brighten the darkest day
Your smile can take my pain away
Your smile just turns me upside down
Your smile in which I could forever drown
 
You smile at me and I am bowled over
At how it changes your face
Such love and joy and happiness
Such dignity and grace
 
Your smile can take me through the darkest nights
Your smile makes me cope with the horrible fights
Your smile does so much you see
Your smile full of love just for me


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Aww, Snow this is so beautiful and loving, such a gentle wording which is masterful as the soft wordflow mirrors the gentle theme. Beautiful poem my friend. 32 thumbs up.

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks eric again, lol.
snow xx

Aww, Snow this is so beautiful and loving, such a gentle wording which is masterful as the soft wordflow mirrors the gentle theme. Beautiful poem my friend. 32 thumbs up.

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks eric for this really lovely comment. it started out as just a look and a thought today and then i sat down and it flowed. thank you again and for the thumbs up
snow x

Aww, Snow this is so beautiful and loving, such a gentle wording which is masterful as the soft wordflow mirrors the gentle theme. Beautiful poem my friend. 32 thumbs up.

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

really glad you liked this oem eric, think technology went mad.
lol. snow =) xx

Wonderful Snow, I can sense your love for this person.

A smile can bring joy to a person in many ways. I am glad you have found someone with such a wonderful smile.

Your forever friend

Boneman x x x

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you boney. my love for this person is very deep and abiding. His smile is precious it lights up my day.
forever your friend
snow xxx

Lydia
(not registered user)

Snow another beautiful poem full of gentle love, A smile can change a life. Lydia

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

how right you are lydia a smile can change a life. thanks for reading and commenting.
snow x

*tears in my eyes*
Why?
I am over whelmed with the honesty and the comparisons and positivity and the love .....

i loved every line....i don't know how to express what this poem did to me but my son's face danced in front of my eyes....

so pure and so divine....

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you for this very lovely comment. I wrote this for my love but as your sons face appeared in front of you I realised it could apply to anyones smile that is important to you. I am really glad you like it.
take care
snow x

Irwin
(not registered user)

Lovely sentiments, sensitively put. I like it.

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

irwin thanks for this lovely comment. i am really glad you like it.
snow x

a lovely piece. Amazing what a smile can do, isn't it?!! keep those smiles coming, snow!.....Jerry

Posted: May 20, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks jerry. a smile is an amazing thing it can light up somebody's day. i like to think i smile a lot, but i do have a terrible frown, lol.
snow x

Love this one Snow! This one puts a smile in my own heart. Your last two poems posted had shown such a wide range of emotions and you did them both justice. Such talent you have!

Posted: May 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Lacey thanks for this really lovely comment. it one of the nicest i have had. Really glad it made you smile.
your friend
snow xx

This poem made me smile even sitting here at my computer at work. It's so amazing how much one smile can do to change our day around. And if it's from the person we love....ah, heaven my friend, heaven! Wonderful!~Em

Posted: May 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Em for this lovely comment. I am glad it made you smile, especially at work. A smile can change a bad day and as you say if its from the one you love...........ahhhhh.
take care
snow x

That's wonderful poem is we need. A smile that can brighten the darkest day , this is so good when in hard times.

Posted: May 21, 2008

Author Comment:

indeed juliano a smile can brighten up the worst of days especially when it is full of love.
speak soon, hugs
snow xx

Isn't it wonderful when a simple smile from that special someone can make you feel as if you're the only person in the world. Their smile has the ability to make you feel important in their life; especially when you're the very reason why they are smiling.

Posted: May 24, 2008

Author Comment:

funny quiche this comment made me smile. he is the very reason i smile and it makes me so happy to know that the reason he smiles is when he sees me in the morning. a smile from that special person in your life is just........there are no words to express how it makes me feel. thanks for reading.
snow

this is so wonderful! it did such a great job! keep it up! :)

Posted: May 25, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for this lovely comment. i am really glad it made you smile.
snow =)

hi snow a really wonderfull peice......happy days julietx

Posted: Sep 28, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks juliet. its good to hear from you. hope all is well with you.
take care
snow x

I think this is a positive poem straight from the heart.
A smile from someone special always makes you feel happy.

Posted: Nov 10, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you azucena for this lovely comment. that smile brightens my darkest days without fail.
take care
snow

Bill
(not registered user)

Well written, expressive poem, for someone you quite obviously adore. More like this please. Bill

Posted: Nov 23, 2008

Author Comment:

bill thank you for this lovely comment. how right you are i do adore him.
more coming soon.
snow

Wow very amazing poem, come check out mine

Posted: Nov 26, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you krissibear. will be sure to come by.
snow =)



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