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Submitted: May 19, 2008 Reads: 965 Comments: 17 Likes: 8
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Aww, Snow this is so beautiful and loving, such a gentle wording which is masterful as the soft wordflow mirrors the gentle theme. Beautiful poem my friend. 32 thumbs up.
Posted: May 19, 2008
Aww, Snow this is so beautiful and loving, such a gentle wording which is masterful as the soft wordflow mirrors the gentle theme. Beautiful poem my friend. 32 thumbs up.
Posted: May 19, 2008
Aww, Snow this is so beautiful and loving, such a gentle wording which is masterful as the soft wordflow mirrors the gentle theme. Beautiful poem my friend. 32 thumbs up.
Posted: May 19, 2008
Wonderful Snow, I can sense your love for this person.
A smile can bring joy to a person in many ways. I am glad you have found someone with such a wonderful smile.
Your forever friend
Boneman x x x
Posted: May 19, 2008
Snow another beautiful poem full of gentle love, A smile can change a life. Lydia
Posted: May 19, 2008
*tears in my eyes*
Why?
I am over whelmed with the honesty and the comparisons and positivity and the love .....
i loved every line....i don't know how to express what this poem did to me but my son's face danced in front of my eyes....
so pure and so divine....
Posted: May 19, 2008
Lovely sentiments, sensitively put. I like it.
Posted: May 19, 2008
a lovely piece. Amazing what a smile can do, isn't it?!! keep those smiles coming, snow!.....Jerry
Posted: May 20, 2008
Love this one Snow! This one puts a smile in my own heart. Your last two poems posted had shown such a wide range of emotions and you did them both justice. Such talent you have!
Posted: May 20, 2008
This poem made me smile even sitting here at my computer at work. It's so amazing how much one smile can do to change our day around. And if it's from the person we love....ah, heaven my friend, heaven! Wonderful!~Em
Posted: May 20, 2008
That's wonderful poem is we need. A smile that can brighten the darkest day , this is so good when in hard times.
Posted: May 21, 2008
Isn't it wonderful when a simple smile from that special someone can make you feel as if you're the only person in the world. Their smile has the ability to make you feel important in their life; especially when you're the very reason why they are smiling.
Posted: May 24, 2008
this is so wonderful! it did such a great job! keep it up! :)
Posted: May 25, 2008
hi snow a really wonderfull peice......happy days julietx
Posted: Sep 28, 2008
I think this is a positive poem straight from the heart.
A smile from someone special always makes you feel happy.
Posted: Nov 10, 2008
Well written, expressive poem, for someone you quite obviously adore. More like this please. Bill
Posted: Nov 23, 2008
Wow very amazing poem, come check out mine
Posted: Nov 26, 2008
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