this is so beautiful.

It makes me sad and I cannot stop crying.

I don't know who this was written for but I know that feeling.

"And cry till the tears come no more"

But the tears keep coming and just when ive thought i have no more tears. they come back.

How do you make them stop?

Posted: Jan 23, 2008

Really good. I had loosen some people that i liked a lot, and this felling of to want to be closer , to hear, to see that person again it is painful . You were able to express yourself very clear about this pain.
Great Poem.

Posted: Jan 23, 2008

Really moving poem, Snow. Really don't know what to say.

I hope you find comfort in time, the sweet memories of this person will live on in your heart. Their spirit lingers on as long as you remember them. There are no words anyone can say to ease the pain of grief and loss.

In time I believe you will have comfort as everyone you have lost still comforts you.

There will always be tears for lost loved ones......

I wish you peace and love

Your booksie friend

Boneman x x x

Posted: Jan 23, 2008

The loss of someone close to you is never easy, as beautifuly described in this remarkable piece. But like boneman said, as long as we keep their memories alive in our hearts and souls, they'll always be alive. You're in my thoughts and I hope that the tears do stop one day and turn into sweet memories. "A rose I set upon your grave
Single and red"
One of the most powerful lines in this piece.

Posted: Jan 23, 2008

i cried as i read this poem, beautifully written with compassion and love. never forget that this person lives on in your heart.
lydia

Posted: Jan 25, 2008

snowbell this touched my heart, a loss of someone we love is heartbreaking, yet time heals, we learn to live with the heartche, and eventually life carries on but they always remain in our hearts, my thoughts are truly with you...god bless juliet

Posted: Jan 26, 2008

this was beautiful. touch me so much i felt a link to someone i lost just 17months ago and that still hurts and i cry till i the tears come no more
x k x

i have poems of my loved one on my link if u wanna read

Posted: Feb 4, 2008

I have just started reading your poetry and this beautiful peace moved me. I hope things get easier for you in time.
D

Posted: Mar 9, 2008